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Waiting
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Waiting |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Waiting In the fever of the moment I cry out for you. The warmth of a soak hasn't helped the ache I feel. Drowning in liquid doesn't stop the cough from rising in my throat, wishing a kiss could replace my sighs of ill. It never fails to come to me, when the world has sprinkled a bit of hope my way. Waiting, is all I ever do. Waiting, is all I can do. In time this too shall pass, but in the fever of this moment I still wait for word from only you. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely but sad write here Wynter. Enjoyed this one, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Mmmm..I've certainly felt like this before. The cough and all! Great poem. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the waiting can be the hardest part of all when it involves love. You have written those feelings one gets when waiting so very well. BRAVO!!! I love it.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Some of the best things happen to those who can wait ... to any response, life, love, or just the right moment. Thank you for sharing this waiting moment, I hope happiness shines upon you as your words shine for me here. With my best always, Craig. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I hope you are feeling better soon Music, tonal clear & pure, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
oh, I have the flu or something like it again, and I was just waiting for a word to cheer me up a bit...thank you all ..and chanson..I won't be on much as I can barely sit on my own skin...at least I got the thermostat fixed finally and can have some heat now...hugsssss catch you in a day or so. M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Hey, you're back! I'm not writing anything right now but I wanted you to know I am getting better and hope the writing helps. Maureen, take care of yourself first! Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Feel better, and guess what, I am waiting for everything still, also. And it seems neverending. Take care. Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 11-05-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This one is thought provoking. Nicely done. All writing comes |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Wynter..this is sadly beautiful. I hope the time you have to wait is short lived. alan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Wynter, this is so so sad and I pray with all my heart joy and love cures the fever! (sigh) My heart is with you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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