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Tender Kisses Senryu
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Tender Kisses Senryu |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Tender Kisses Senryu By: Noah Eaton 11/4/01 Crescent Kiss Sitting on the moon Waiting for my angel's kiss From the heavens stars Innocent Kiss Roseate faces blush Tender hearts touch in rhythm Crooning in rapture Under The Full Moon Lovers waltz the night Wishing upon eternal stars Under the full moon [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 11-04-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Noah - it warms my heart to see a young man like you so romantic and tender  These are lovely senryus - nice theme!  Keep up the great work m'friend  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Well done on this one! I don't normally like senryus, but this one is really good! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Nice write, enjoyed he read. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Noah, you are so good at writing these. I enjoy reading them. |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Very lovely...I wrote some 'haiku' once and got told they were, instead, 'senryu.' My reference book seems a bit vague on exact meanings, so, when I post mine, I'm not going to call them either one! Just, 'poems,' I guess. But, very good senryu, if that's what you call them. |
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