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Jericha Satchel
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since 2001-11-04
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0 posted 2001-11-04 03:09 AM


listen while a balloon man tells his story -
in nowtimes of neverwhere -
he takes each dream; untied, it slips from bitter string

love, while you sit in old cafes for honeydew and tea
remember when of nevernow and order blue for me


Jericha Satchel

"mnikt yasea mvy eil no r"

[This message has been edited by Jericha Satchel (edited 11-04-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Jericha Satchel - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-11-04 05:23 AM


I like the feel og this line...welcome

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Nan
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2 posted 2001-11-04 08:27 AM


This is very insightful and full of thought-provoking metaphors.  Nice job, Jericha - Welcome to Passions - Settle in and make yourself comfy - You're gonna love it here...

Check your email for a special greeting..

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-11-04 08:44 AM



I am going to really enjoy watching your work...Welcome To Passions!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-11-04 09:29 AM



Great First Post!!
Look forward to seeing more from you!
   ~Nancy Lee~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Martie
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5 posted 2001-11-04 10:39 AM


Loved this poem!!  Welcome to Passions!
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2001-11-04 12:15 PM




(big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! WONDERFUL EXPRESSIVE WRITE, DEAREST JERICHA!!! (smiles) Welcome to Passions, may you be inspired by us all here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jericha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-11-04 12:53 PM


what a very very cool poem ...
such a unique and clever write of imagery and succinctity...

remindeds me of the style of a fave poets-- Richard Brautigan or early McKuen.

Welcome to Poetry Land ... so nice to meet you, I will be looking for more of your work.
take care
jm

Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2001-11-04 12:55 PM


Awesome entrance, Jericha.  I enjoyed this one.  

Welcome to Passions!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Magnus
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9 posted 2001-11-04 12:56 PM


beautifully said....such unique way of penning
feelings.  I like this style.....

And welcome so much to Passions,  tis a warm
place to express yourself.

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
10 posted 2001-11-04 01:17 PM


Welcome to the family!!! I enjoyed reading this and look forward to much more from you.  
Midnitesun
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Gaia
11 posted 2001-11-04 01:42 PM


May I sit and have tea and honeydew with you sometime, and capture an escaping balloon?

Welcome! It is a very interesting post.


BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
12 posted 2001-11-04 01:48 PM


I liked what you said about the neverwhere, nevernow, and of course I'm partial to blue tea.     
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
13 posted 2001-11-04 06:58 PM


A unique way of creating a vision of love. I will be looking forward to more of your work. Welcome to Passions. You will find her the most loving and talented poets on the net.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Accordionmaid
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14 posted 2001-11-04 07:03 PM


Nice!
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