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honeydew and tea |
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Jericha Satchel Junior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 11 |
listen while a balloon man tells his story - in nowtimes of neverwhere - he takes each dream; untied, it slips from bitter string love, while you sit in old cafes for honeydew and tea remember when of nevernow and order blue for me Jericha Satchel "mnikt yasea mvy eil no r" [This message has been edited by Jericha Satchel (edited 11-04-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I like the feel og this line...welcome ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is very insightful and full of thought-provoking metaphors. Nice job, Jericha - Welcome to Passions - Settle in and make yourself comfy - You're gonna love it here...  Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am going to really enjoy watching your work...Welcome To Passions! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Great First Post!! Look forward to seeing more from you! ~Nancy Lee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Loved this poem!! Welcome to Passions! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! WONDERFUL EXPRESSIVE WRITE, DEAREST JERICHA!!! (smiles) Welcome to Passions, may you be inspired by us all here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jericha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what a very very cool poem ... such a unique and clever write of imagery and succinctity... remindeds me of the style of a fave poets-- Richard Brautigan or early McKuen. Welcome to Poetry Land ... so nice to meet you, I will be looking for more of your work. take care jm |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Awesome entrance, Jericha. I enjoyed this one. Welcome to Passions!  All writing comes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
beautifully said....such unique way of penning feelings. I like this style..... And welcome so much to Passions, tis a warm place to express yourself. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family!!! I enjoyed reading this and look forward to much more from you.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
May I sit and have tea and honeydew with you sometime, and capture an escaping balloon? Welcome! It is a very interesting post. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I liked what you said about the neverwhere, nevernow, and of course I'm partial to blue tea. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A unique way of creating a vision of love. I will be looking forward to more of your work. Welcome to Passions. You will find her the most loving and talented poets on the net. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Nice! |
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