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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-11-03 08:05 AM


Safe harbor

Today I stand a hill of thoughts
A ship that sails to many ports
The day is gay the sails at play
And I am on adventures way.

The clouds pass in a sky of blue
And golden rays of sun pass through.
I am at rest the breeze is west
And this is when I’m at my best.

Misty brine encases my face
Embracing me in loving grace.
I hold the wheel with hands of feel
My heart armored with lovers steel.

I feel a giant standing tall
I own this world it is my all.
Moment to moment short the stay
And I am here, this time, this day.

Take my hand and feel the rise
This life is but, one big surprise.


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WRBreezin
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1 posted 2001-11-03 08:08 AM



A joyful vision of the heart and the sea...Just Great!

Willie B

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-11-03 08:22 AM


I sing your song this morning..*s

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-11-03 09:00 AM


WRBreezin,
Thank you Willie B.

Maureen,
Nice to have you aboard. *L*

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-11-03 09:02 AM


The day is gay the sails at play
And I am on adventures way.
=================================
I am at rest the breeze is west
And this is when I’m at my best.
================================
I hold the wheel with hands of feel
My heart armored with lovers steel.

I feel a giant standing tall
I own this world it is my all.
Moment to moment short the stay
And I am here, this time, this day.

Take my hand and feel the rise
This life is but, one big surprise.
====================================


YOU ARE SO COOOOOL ....
(ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)
My KING of internal rhyme divine
oh how you shine.
I love this poem of anticipation and inspiration!!!

and this line.........

"Moment to moment short the stay"

could that be any cooler?  

and this line...........

And this is when I’m at my best.

You are right...THIS IS when you are at your best...
when you have your POETS PEN in hand....
and baby...it looks good on you. *winkiewinkie*
me



I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever ... you still take my breath away ...

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2001-11-03 09:10 AM


Beautiful Sy. I hear there is more than a stiff breeze blowing towards Florida. Please stay safe!
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-11-03 09:18 AM


JM,
Pick a ship and we'll take a trip.
And some raspberry tea to sip.
We'll go to places not been found
Those fantasies still unbound.

We'll play upon those beach far
And make a hammy under the stars.
Winkiewinkie.



Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-11-03 09:19 AM


Poet deVine,
I'll do my best fair lady. *L*

Martie
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8 posted 2001-11-03 10:14 AM


Sy...A spirit filled word lift for me...thank you!
SmartChick
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9 posted 2001-11-03 12:15 PM


You are such a talented writer. I love reading you work. And,I love surprises.

If I wan't so afraid
Of water so deep
A trip I would take
Of memories to keep

Tiersdin
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10 posted 2001-11-03 12:19 PM


Thank you for the ride, Seymour...

excellent write!

~tier

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-11-03 12:55 PM


Martie,
You welcome sweet. *L*

SmartChick,
Thank you and *L*

Tiersdin,
Thank you for the excellent.

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2001-11-03 01:23 PM


Do you remember *wink*  *L*  
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Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2001-11-03 02:41 PM


JM,
Yes I remember and I'll sail upon your sea anytime.
You are another live to me
Another life another sea.
You are the face of my gleam
You are the real of my dream.
Winkiewinkie.

Denise
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14 posted 2001-11-03 03:06 PM


I love those moments! Well written, Sy!
Startime
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15 posted 2001-11-03 05:30 PM


*sigh* this wonderful left me with a feeling of being refreshed in heart, body, soul and mind. Thank you!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sunshine
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16 posted 2001-11-03 06:05 PM



Randy stayed the night away
Sy, instead, came out to play

and very well, indeed!

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2001-11-03 07:19 PM


Denise Thank you so much. *L*

Startime, You are a sweetheart. *L*

Sunshine, And very nice indeed. *L*

Mistletoe Angel
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18 posted 2001-11-03 07:26 PM




(big hugggsssssss) YAY!!! What a beautiful feeling to sail the high seas of life and relax and enjoy the ride, and feel the love and the spirit life brings us! (smiles) Sooooo beautifully captivating, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

rwood
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19 posted 2001-11-03 09:32 PM


I thought I saw you sail by...~Smile~...Me in my mustang and you sailing your ship...we are just leaving Dodge in our own way today! I really enjoyed this journey.

Sincerely,
Regina

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2001-11-04 06:36 PM


Noah,
Sweet comment, thank you.

Rwood,
And I enjoy yours. *L*

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