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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Satin By: Noah Eaton 8/21/01 Silky your tender words are Smooth your warm skin is A love so real, weaved from synthetic desires Sharing a love as soft as Satin Breathing deeply in velvet candlelight Stroking fingertips against glossy flesh Enfolding into the wings of a dove As you coo words of Satin in our lovers nest Smothered in earthly nirvana Heaven dangling just above our heads Represented in the visit of the full moon Chanting in it's white Satin glow, shining upon our bed Staring into glistening starlit eyes Silver tears inching down your face Melting your heart with passions gentle prong Releasing feelings from Satin lips in comfortable grace Desires strummed in meter and rhyme Cherishing each lovely bliss If flowers can speak, they sigh in your beauty In words of Satin, spoken from your tender lips Making love to you On this majestic night Tucking you under covers Of white Satin, shimmering in the moonlight [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very Romantic, Noah  Lovely. Maree. [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very nice, the alliteration helped it slide through the read as if on satin *s* |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Noah, your poem really enhances the sensation of silky skin and satin sheets... um........ ^.^ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soft as Satin! Very beautiful, Noah! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, Have I said recently that I just love your poetry? Your write with such sweet romance.... *sighs* Just wonderful. Beautiful Hugs, Tara |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so beautiful Noah. You write of romance so well. The imagery here is striking indeed. Lovely. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
You evoked a silky sigh from me with every stanza...but this is my favourite: "Staring into glistening starlit eyes Silver tears inching down your face Melting your heart with passions gentle prong Releasing feelings from Satin lips in comfortable grace" This is exquiste sweet Noah. Romance suits you well! Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Noah, you are such a romantic! Do or die! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good writing Noah...James |
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