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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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If I sing out loud Will you cover your ears? If you made me cry Would you shed your tears? If we got into a fight Would you apologize? If I asked for the truth Could you look in my eyes? If I kissed your lips How would you react? If I left you alone Would you pray that I come back? If I held you in my arms Would your body shake? If I returned to your side Would you consider it fate? If I told you I love you Would you flash a smile? How long would you wait for me? Is my love worthwhile? |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
True love is always worthwhile, Joanna. Very well done.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Love is always worthwhile and the love you have to give is priceless. The man who finally captures your heart will be very lucky indeed for he will have won a rare treasure. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love is always worthwhile but it's hard to say for sure. Speaking for myself, if he didn't cover his ears when I sang, I would say he just might. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i hope the answer is yes and this made me think. nice job yuh |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That's a lotta if's...If he comes back, will you be glad? |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Pure imagination, made it up : ) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! BRAVO!!! (big huggsssssss) I love it! Your heart always shines with pure love and the love of your dreams will be so lucky to have you forever, just as your heart will sing. (smiles) Hey, by the way, I added you to my Buddy List on AOL, my AOL screen-name is TamariskGod. (smiles) I'd love to talk to you whenever you'd like, dear friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I think these are all questions anyone who has loved and lost has asked themselves a million times. Many times we do nothing and wait for the other person to come to us. What is they are waiting for us to come to them? It would definitely be a risk, but only you know if that is worth taking. Very intriguing write. All writing comes |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
These questions would be asked if someone loved another and thought they wouldn't be loved back. Nice perceptions! Do or die! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When you love someone they can get away with alot...not that they should try it...because love can fade if unappreciated...James |
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