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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Something, aptly, "beautiful" silver lace, stars of glitter... scent of oil, egyptian musk-- and incense, acrid, sweet, but bitter... the touch of satin lips meet mine... intensity of eye, entwined. Feed the hunger, never filled-- decant, from chalice, slippery, chilled... Too late, I feel the glass stem break. Too late. I've shattered. I'm opaque. I have no instinct for the kill--- I loved you then, I love you still. Too late, too late... I hug my knees, rock to cadence-- no relief... I'll sleep until my last dream's done... to wake to drink the lust of sun. A proper prayer, upon my knees... to think that you might just like me... and show me,trust me, one page more... a sky of blue-- the sea of green horizon, distant, near the shore... *repost from Open...8?) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice Karen...and so how is it going for you ..*s I hope well. ((hugs)) Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Sooooooo passionate and beautiful! (sigh) Who would not answer your beautiful prayer and rest beside your sweet golden heart? (sigh) Sooooooo gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) Back up to the top you go! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
this is interesting, a little out there, but interesting. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Karen, a very sensual write. I LOVE sensual writes! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Hey girl ... I like it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Write on! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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