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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-11-08 11:24 AM


Now I’m just an old country boy
No knight on prancing steed
The ladies often look over me
For the flashy kind they need

But still I know the sunrise
Have listened to the brook
Spent some time to my surprise
Lost in many a book

I can’t match with bravado
The ways of some round here
I am no desperado
But in my heart it’s clear

I’d rather have a single gal
To kiss and swoon o’er me
For more is not better pal
If its love you want to see.


© Copyright 2001 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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1 posted 2001-11-08 11:26 AM


Well said
Quality over Quanity.

Gloom

Robert A
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2 posted 2001-11-08 11:29 AM


something tells me this fella is missing something here, but then I've not posted anything yet, now I'm shakin' in my boots and I don't even wear boots
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with you
3 posted 2001-11-08 11:30 AM


I love this.  
one is enough, but when you are just playing and hoping only for smiles, nothing more....what is so wrong with a crowd?  

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2001-11-08 01:23 PM


OOOOOHHHHHHH! PICK ME!!!!  

(Not exactly known for my subtlety!  )

but you guys are killin' me over here, what's a poor lonely poet girl to do? *pout*

Lady In White
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5 posted 2001-11-08 01:27 PM



A challenge well met - if you can please one...

you've pleased them all.  There is nothing better than seeing one man love one woman the right way....

Well done!

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6 posted 2001-11-08 01:33 PM


Nicely done! It's sure hard to beat this site for top quality men...available or not, you guys are the BEST! Now, if you are having trouble singling out one lady, may I suggest a night underneath an aurora? Just bring your booties...longjohns optional equipment. Alas, I heard the aurora was also visible as far south as Kansas a few days ago, so it may be harder to find that gal.
CocoBaci
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7 posted 2001-11-08 01:44 PM


But still I know the sunrise
Have listened to the brook

CPAT, a challenge well met  
Hugs2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

Enchantress
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8 posted 2001-11-08 01:49 PM


Ron, very well said indeed.  But, how about fun hugs??  Like just funnin around?  AND... Robert!  Time for a post, eh?  ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Duncan
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9 posted 2001-11-08 02:05 PM


Sneaking over to Ron's side.
Damn, I hope that tall Texan doesn't beat me up.
I'm so confused.  I want my blanket!

rwood
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10 posted 2001-11-08 06:10 PM


How could anyone overlook this?...A fair duel with no smoking gun....class I say class...that is you C....Bravo!

Sincerely,
Regina

Tiersdin
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11 posted 2001-11-08 06:13 PM


Go, Captain, Go!

*smiles*

~Tier

Interloper
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12 posted 2001-11-08 06:19 PM


Now I'm confused.  Shux, I think ah'll stick with my persona 'cuz th' reel me would think a reply beneath my dignity. (duz thet rime?)

Ah luv all the gals, 'cuz gals iz jest spayshul critterz.  They crave romance, an' since ah luv romance and ritin' 'bout it, it makes fur gud bedfellows ... uh, um, wal, ya know whut ah meen, pardner!

Ron, you are a rascal  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-08-2001).]

Martie
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13 posted 2001-11-08 06:38 PM


Cpat--A sensative poem, sweet and real.  Thank you!
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