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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers 
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Like the poem suggests, I wrote it after an exam... Really tired and really stressed, but juz felt the sudden urge to write. It is just another boring day - more so I sat alone in the library Flipping nervously through my books I just sat for a paper in the morning It was supposed to be difficult Well... at least hard enough To keep me up half the night worrying Yet while I was filling in the blanks I thought to myself I should have slept earlier It just wasn't worth the stress Then came my next paper A long wait in the afternoon It was supposed to be easy! I thought it would be a breeze - an ace to bag Yet I was caught by surprise Was I overconfident? Did this paper seem harder? Or was I lacking in practice? Now I am tired, mentally drained My head is throbbing Like it will split in between My muscles are aching Having created a miracle Making pens fly across paper My mind is dulled By the gentle rock of the bus Boy I wish it would move faster So I could seek the comforts of my bed It is almost a day now I miss the softness of my pillow This day is ending soon Tomorrow is yet another beginning |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
They are stressful! Good luck with the rest of your school.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Mon Cherie....This day is ending soon Tomorrow is yet another beginning...this is more of true statement than you realize yet, for each day is another beginning for us, and if we can look at it, and let the yesterdays be just those, then we can go through life much easier..Good luck to you, very gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Mon, my heart goes out to your stress and exhaustion, but look at the bright side; that day is coming then you'll be able to rest upon your soft pillow much more and enjoy all the things you love to do! (big hugggssssss) We're so proud of you, sweet friend. Believe me, I am going through all of that now too, as I go through my senior year of high school! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I'm proud of you for even trying to do what you do! Hang in there...I hope everything turns out great. Get some rest sweet poet.. Sincerely, Regina |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice job of writing about your feelings after a day of papers, tests, pests and all of those tedious things that are SUPPOSED to help our education process... Whewwwwww. |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Mon Cherie, I'd say you've given us the reality of the moment...good show! Willie B |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Thanks! Thank you for your encouragement, and your warm-hearted words of consolation. *sigh* Time flies, and I'm going through ANOTHER exam *sigh* they never seem to end... |
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