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Autumnal Fog
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Autumnal Fog |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Autumnal Fog Virginia Salter morning fog blurs this sentient being’s vision like smoky vapors off dying embers of earth raling up a coughin’ spasm where maybe none would have been found causing my very soul to seek answers, some kind of sense, in what I feel or don’t feel, in what I see or don’t see it’s as a pall has settled upon my earth my world confounding the present with the past and the future leaving a limbo in its wake © November 3, 2001 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
It's amazing how fog can somehow make our thoughts drift in strange directions. You wrote this so well I could almost feel the fog flowing around making me feel unconnected somehow. Well done.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
The fog makes things seem so abnormal. I liked this one, Virginia!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your poem has that misty, foggy feel to it. A good setting for reflective thoughts on the state of the world. |
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