Open Poetry #16 |
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Mind Bomb |
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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
Let her into your world see the stories of past unfold history of boxed emotions, unravelled walk down these roads not often travelled A spec of light that shines so bright shows me the way in the darkest night always there, guiding me to a place mortals cannot see Heaven on earth, or heaven sent this feeling I have is hell bent Happiness sought like the holy grail my strength though weak shall prevail no more long empty dark nights just the pinnacle, of love scaled Come with me, entwine our hearts no time for error, or repeated starts dive in head first and drown in lust for between us there lies a trust built from love, tempered with steel you know i am a man who feels the passions of flesh, the touches so light that fuel the silent love long into the night The space between us, is no more like carpet you lay me softly on the floor Hug and hold me, be my skin and together, forever just fall in love.... Richy |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"dive in head first and drown in lust" YES!!! hehe loved this one! ![]() |
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Child_Like_UK New Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 1 |
I love you Rich x |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, great write Richy. Love that last stanza. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Simply... beautiful... ~Tier |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I love this so much! It's so well written!! ^.^ |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YES!!! ![]() Dive right in...what an inviting line. |
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