Open Poetry #16 |
Overload |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My mind goes into overload as another day passes by. Nothing ever good enough no matter how hard I try. First it's this, then it's that no time to breathe, just sigh. I watch the setting sun the darkness growing nigh I stare up at the heavens and lift my voice on high, please let this weary heart rest so I might dry these tears I cry please help me to understand why must it be this hard..please just tell me.. WHY! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
First it's this, then it's that no time to breathe, just sigh. I watch the setting sun the darkness growing nigh I stare up at the heavens and lift my voice on high, I can feel the stress and the pressure as I read your poem ^.^ Very nicely written... But what makes you so sad? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Gentle Spirit, I understand you. In fact, I wrote one yesterday entitled 'Synaptic Overload.' (Not posted it yet.) Maybe we were sitting under the same dark cloud yesterday? |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Hey Lady! Chin up....and don't forget to smile...cause yur special! Sorry the day seems to be getting the best of you...but not a chance. {Hugs!} Sincerely, Regina |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, I know just how you feel! Now put a smile on your face, take a deep breath, take a little break then face all your worries with faith and hope! (big hugggssssss) We all love yu, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
There is always the hope of a new day, in which we see things differently. Thank God for that. Beautifully expressed. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Gentle Spirit, we all feel the way that you have felt. I recieved this email the other night and it was worth the read. Try to keep smiling, don't forget we are all friends here. Sincerely Rick How true!!!!!!!!!! I AM THANKFUL FOR ...... THE PARTNER WHO HOGS THE COVERS EVERY NIGHT BECAUSE HE/SHE IS NOT OUT WITH SOMEONE ELSE. THE TEENAGER WHO IS NOT DOING DISHES BUT IS WATCHING TV, BECAUSE THAT MEANS HE/SHE IS AT HOME AND NOT ON THE STREETS. FOR THE TAXES THAT I PAY, BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT I AM EMPLOYED. FOR THE MESS TO CLEAN AFTER A PARTY, BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT I HAVE BEEN SURROUNDED BY FRIENDS. FOR THE CLOTHES THAT FIT A LITTLE TOO SNUG, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE ENOUGH TO EAT. FOR MY SHADOW THAT WATCHES ME WORK, BECAUSE IT MEANS I AM IN THE SUNSHINE. FOR A LAWN THAT NEEDS MOWING, WINDOWS THAT NEED CLEANING, AND GUTTERS THAT NEED FIXING, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE A HOME. FOR ALL THE COMPLAINING I HEAR ABOUT THE GOVERNMENT, BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT WE HAVE FREEDOM OF SPEECH. FOR THE PARKING SPOT I FIND AT THE FAR END OF THE PARKING LOT, BECAUSE IT MEANS I AM CAPABLE OF WALKING AND THAT I HAVE BEEN BLESSED WITH TRANSPORTATION. FOR MY HUGE HEATING BILL, BECAUSE IT MEANS I AM WARM. FOR THE LADY BEHIND ME IN CHURCH THAT SINGS OFF KEY, BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT I CAN HEAR. FOR THE PILE OF LAUNDRY AND IRONING, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE CLOTHES TO WEAR. FOR WEARINESS AND ACHING MUSCLES AT THE END OF THE DAY, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE BEEN CAPABLE OF WORKING HARD. FOR THE ALARM THAT GOES OFF IN THE EARLY MORNING HOURS, BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT I AM ALIVE. AND FINALLY....... FOR TOO MUCH E-MAIL, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE FRIENDS WHO ARE THINKING OF ME. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all, and I appreciate and luv you all too. Just one of those stressing days, and then the sun arises......and life is new again. Hugs and peace to all!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
no one knows why do we? |
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