Open Poetry #16 |
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Overload |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
My mind goes into overload as another day passes by. Nothing ever good enough no matter how hard I try. First it's this, then it's that no time to breathe, just sigh. I watch the setting sun the darkness growing nigh I stare up at the heavens and lift my voice on high, please let this weary heart rest so I might dry these tears I cry please help me to understand why must it be this hard..please just tell me.. WHY! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
First it's this, then it's that no time to breathe, just sigh. I watch the setting sun the darkness growing nigh I stare up at the heavens and lift my voice on high, I can feel the stress and the pressure as I read your poem ^.^ Very nicely written... But what makes you so sad? |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Gentle Spirit, I understand you. In fact, I wrote one yesterday entitled 'Synaptic Overload.' (Not posted it yet.) Maybe we were sitting under the same dark cloud yesterday? |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Hey Lady! Chin up....and don't forget to smile...cause yur special! Sorry the day seems to be getting the best of you...but not a chance. {Hugs!} Sincerely, Regina |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, I know just how you feel! Now put a smile on your face, take a deep breath, take a little break then face all your worries with faith and hope! (big hugggssssss) We all love yu, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
There is always the hope of a new day, in which we see things differently. Thank God for that. Beautifully expressed. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Gentle Spirit, we all feel the way that you have felt. I recieved this email the other night and it was worth the read. Try to keep smiling, don't forget we are all friends here. Sincerely Rick How true!!!!!!!!!! I AM THANKFUL FOR ...... THE PARTNER WHO HOGS THE COVERS EVERY NIGHT BECAUSE HE/SHE IS NOT OUT WITH SOMEONE ELSE. THE TEENAGER WHO IS NOT DOING DISHES BUT IS WATCHING TV, BECAUSE THAT MEANS HE/SHE IS AT HOME AND NOT ON THE STREETS. FOR THE TAXES THAT I PAY, BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT I AM EMPLOYED. FOR THE MESS TO CLEAN AFTER A PARTY, BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT I HAVE BEEN SURROUNDED BY FRIENDS. FOR THE CLOTHES THAT FIT A LITTLE TOO SNUG, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE ENOUGH TO EAT. FOR MY SHADOW THAT WATCHES ME WORK, BECAUSE IT MEANS I AM IN THE SUNSHINE. FOR A LAWN THAT NEEDS MOWING, WINDOWS THAT NEED CLEANING, AND GUTTERS THAT NEED FIXING, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE A HOME. FOR ALL THE COMPLAINING I HEAR ABOUT THE GOVERNMENT, BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT WE HAVE FREEDOM OF SPEECH. FOR THE PARKING SPOT I FIND AT THE FAR END OF THE PARKING LOT, BECAUSE IT MEANS I AM CAPABLE OF WALKING AND THAT I HAVE BEEN BLESSED WITH TRANSPORTATION. FOR MY HUGE HEATING BILL, BECAUSE IT MEANS I AM WARM. FOR THE LADY BEHIND ME IN CHURCH THAT SINGS OFF KEY, BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT I CAN HEAR. FOR THE PILE OF LAUNDRY AND IRONING, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE CLOTHES TO WEAR. FOR WEARINESS AND ACHING MUSCLES AT THE END OF THE DAY, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE BEEN CAPABLE OF WORKING HARD. FOR THE ALARM THAT GOES OFF IN THE EARLY MORNING HOURS, BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT I AM ALIVE. AND FINALLY....... FOR TOO MUCH E-MAIL, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE FRIENDS WHO ARE THINKING OF ME. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all, and I appreciate and luv you all too. Just one of those stressing days, and then the sun arises......and life is new again. ![]() On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
no one knows why do we? |
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