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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-11-03 09:12 AM



My mind goes into overload
as another day passes by.
Nothing ever good enough
no matter how hard I try.
First it's this, then it's that
no time to breathe, just sigh.
I watch the setting sun
the darkness growing nigh
I stare up at the heavens
and lift my voice on high,
please let this weary heart rest
so I might dry these tears I cry
please help me to understand
why must it be this hard..please just tell me..
WHY!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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Mon Cherie
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1 posted 2001-11-03 09:18 AM


First it's this, then it's that
no time to breathe, just sigh.
I watch the setting sun
the darkness growing nigh
I stare up at the heavens
and lift my voice on high,


I can feel the stress and the pressure as I read your poem ^.^ Very nicely written... But what makes you so sad?

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2 posted 2001-11-03 12:42 PM


Gentle Spirit, I understand you. In fact, I wrote one yesterday entitled 'Synaptic Overload.' (Not posted it yet.) Maybe we were sitting under the same dark cloud yesterday?
rwood
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3 posted 2001-11-03 01:31 PM


Hey Lady! Chin up....and don't forget to smile...cause yur special! Sorry the day seems to be getting the best of you...but not a chance. {Hugs!}

Sincerely,
Regina

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4 posted 2001-11-03 06:08 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, I know just how you feel! Now put a smile on your face, take a deep breath, take a little break then face all your worries with faith and hope! (big hugggssssss) We all love yu, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

walker
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5 posted 2001-11-03 06:25 PM


There is always the hope of a new day, in which we see things differently. Thank God for that. Beautifully expressed.
Rick
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6 posted 2001-11-03 06:45 PM


Dear Gentle Spirit, we all feel the way that you have felt. I recieved this email the other night and it was worth the read.
Try to keep smiling, don't forget we are all friends here.

Sincerely
Rick

How true!!!!!!!!!!

I AM THANKFUL FOR ......
THE PARTNER WHO HOGS THE COVERS EVERY NIGHT
BECAUSE HE/SHE IS NOT OUT WITH SOMEONE ELSE.

THE TEENAGER WHO IS NOT DOING DISHES
BUT IS WATCHING TV, BECAUSE THAT MEANS
HE/SHE IS AT HOME AND NOT ON THE STREETS.

FOR THE TAXES THAT I PAY, BECAUSE IT
MEANS THAT I AM EMPLOYED.

FOR THE MESS TO CLEAN AFTER A PARTY,
BECAUSE IT MEANS THAT I HAVE BEEN
SURROUNDED BY FRIENDS.

FOR THE CLOTHES THAT FIT A LITTLE TOO
SNUG, BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE ENOUGH TO EAT.

FOR MY SHADOW THAT WATCHES ME
WORK, BECAUSE IT MEANS I AM IN
THE SUNSHINE.

FOR A LAWN THAT NEEDS MOWING,
WINDOWS THAT NEED CLEANING, AND
GUTTERS THAT NEED FIXING, BECAUSE
IT MEANS I HAVE A HOME.

FOR ALL THE COMPLAINING I HEAR ABOUT
THE GOVERNMENT, BECAUSE IT MEANS
THAT WE HAVE FREEDOM OF SPEECH.

FOR THE PARKING SPOT I FIND AT THE FAR
END OF THE PARKING LOT, BECAUSE IT
MEANS I AM CAPABLE OF WALKING AND
THAT I HAVE BEEN BLESSED WITH TRANSPORTATION.

FOR MY HUGE HEATING BILL, BECAUSE IT
MEANS I AM WARM.

FOR THE LADY BEHIND ME IN CHURCH
THAT SINGS OFF KEY, BECAUSE IT MEANS
THAT I CAN HEAR.
FOR THE PILE OF LAUNDRY AND IRONING,
BECAUSE IT MEANS I HAVE CLOTHES TO WEAR.

FOR WEARINESS AND ACHING MUSCLES
AT THE END OF THE DAY, BECAUSE IT
MEANS I HAVE BEEN CAPABLE OF WORKING HARD.

FOR THE ALARM THAT GOES OFF IN THE
EARLY MORNING HOURS, BECAUSE IT
MEANS THAT I AM ALIVE.

AND FINALLY.......
FOR TOO MUCH E-MAIL, BECAUSE IT
MEANS I HAVE FRIENDS WHO ARE
THINKING OF ME.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2001-11-04 03:07 PM


Thank you all, and I appreciate and luv you all too.  Just one of those stressing days, and then the sun arises......and life is new again.      Hugs and peace to all!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Robert A
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8 posted 2001-11-08 11:35 AM


no one knows why do we?
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