Jean `te's Facade........Part 2

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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2001-11-02 11:59 AM

Jean`te’s Facade

the wickedness of winds brought no dismay
she fought naught against anger retained
emotions ran unfettered, unrestricted
radiant excitement unrestrained

onlookers ran, fearing the blackness
bidding her follow, still Kelara held ground
confusion evident, she had no words
knowing to attempt, would only further confound

as blackness neared, she braced understanding
the air, bitter, metallic
she breathed determined breaths, tasting ~
what filled her lungs, wild ~ electric

this was hers, the moment of ancient preachings
what would come to pass, long ago lore
stories told, fantasy thought myth
would be thought unreal no more

~SEA~

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Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-11-02 12:01 PM

Wow! I love this. More! More! mxmdporhd. Darn censors!
Author!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Auguste

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By the sea

2 posted 2001-11-02 12:21 PM

YES!

Excellent, Susan! (((hugs)))

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Logan
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3 posted 2001-11-02 12:25 PM

Ahhh, SEA, you KNOW I just had to love this one..very good...very gentle smile

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-11-02 12:30 PM

Susan! Just look at you go girl! Wonderful!! Bravo! ...and hugs from me.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet

5 posted 2001-11-02 02:57 PM

SEA~ The first one was a tough one to follow but you have still come out ahead....once again, there is wonderful imagery in this and the tale is addictive...I echo the above poets, more! More!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-11-02 03:31 PM

the wickedness of winds brought no dismay
she fought naught against anger retained
emotions ran unfettered, unrestricted
radiant excitement unrestrained
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this was hers, the moment of ancient preachings
what would come to pass, long ago lore
stories told, fantasy thought myth
would be thought unreal no more
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I like seeing you broadening your vocabulary
and stretching for the imagery.
this is an "electric" write...
builds like a storm coming in...leaves the reader wanting more.....
very cool Sea.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-11-02 03:32 PM

Building well indeed....looking forward to more....

Startime
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Canada

8 posted 2001-11-02 04:17 PM

Mystically magnificent. There is something ancient in this tale you weave and I love it. BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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