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The Two of Me
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The Two of Me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Two of Me I walk a mirrored course I see Where shadows always follow me. They stay and gray a daily play Like another life, another way They hold my hand when I write Imply things that are out of sight. They lay strange thoughts between each line Where treading could explode a mine And doubtful meanings twist my thoughts And ghosts walk out the symbols wrought. Where mirrored phantoms come about And double meanings covert doubt. I cannot stay these thoughts allure And cannot sift the sand to pure There is a gray within my soul Another life of secret goal Pulled by forces that surround Sometimes I feel a puppet bound. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
beneath the moon where silence sounds amid the float of leaving ground where all your doubts convene the night reveal your fears in leave of write... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Inspired writing. *L* |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!! I think within each of us in another. This poem is honest and beautifully put. It makes me want take a look in my own mirror and wonder who or what I may be hiding a part of myself from. Strange thoughts your words evoke in this star. Well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
True and thank you Startime |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A beautiful poem. I love it. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick, Thank you sweet. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Mirror Mirror on the wall Who is the wisest poet of them all ... Tis the one who sees beyond the soul The one who knows the truth found in the goal The one who dares to look into the shadow's reflection The one who tastes temptation and still finds direction In each of us lies a dragon in sleep In each of lies the secret we cant keep   *winkiewinkie* I do so love when you and Randy duet  very very cool poem Stinky  meI can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Like I said it's a good thing you are non fattening. Cause I can't get enough of you. Winkiewinkie Stinky. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
This to me, says so much of how I feel. I think I will save this and play off the words later when I have more time. Thank you, Sy Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
You welcome sweet Maureen. *L |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well then ... that is a good thing for you... Cuz .. Im a gemini ... so there are TWO OF ME TOO *L* *winkiewinkie* and as you know ... Raspberries are naturally sweet ROFL I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Well than, raspberries to us. Winkiewinkie. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
BEAUTIFUL!!!! Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charism, Thank you sweet lady. *L* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Love the title Seymour "The Two of Me" I'm a Gemini also, it attracted me, and the poem is fantastic, I can relate in many ways. A wonderful write! Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark angel Gemini, Thank you sweet angel *L* |
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