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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-11-01 11:08 AM

Rings of Time

The tears that you shed today
Will lantern your tomorrow.
They will stabilize your day
And wash away your sorrow.

They’re the nectar of your youth
The passion of your flower
And they’ll fill a lovers tooth
With sweetness of its power

Vainglory of Amory
Shines within each separate style
The story of your glory
Truth that starts your every wile

Petals of your life unfold
It’s the sound within your chime.
Each forever story told
And the ring you grab of time.

Believe me dear and never fear.
It is the reason we are here.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-11-01 11:13 AM

Rarely do I have a favorite of any line, as all of them speak to me, but today, this

quote:
The tears that you shed today
Will lantern your tomorrow.

spoke a little louder....

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-11-01 11:17 AM

The tears that you shed today
Will lantern your tomorrow.
They will stabilize your day
And wash away your sorrow.

Shines within each separate style

Truth that starts your every wile

Petals of your life unfold
It’s the sound within your chime.
Each forever story told
And the ring you grab of time.

Believe me dear and never fear.
It is the reason we are here.
====================================

oh me sweet Stinky...did ya just know how I needed these words of wise this morn *S*
and this is classic Sy Tabin poetry...
wisdom of the years and truth wrapped in rhyme......
and the reason I hang on your every word...simply put...you light up my life.
(YOU are a lantern)
*winkiewinkie*
(ohilwywlt)

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

3 posted 2001-11-01 11:25 AM

Lot of wisdom here, Seymour, a LOT of wisdom, thank you!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-11-01 11:25 AM

The wisdom in your words helps us to see within ourselves and find the lantern which will burn with a brightness that will lead us into our tomorrows. I love this poem and what it has to say to us all. **hug** thank you for sharing it...you will touch people with these words that will help them to heal and look forward to a new day.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

5 posted 2001-11-01 11:31 AM

Seymour,

I think everyone loved the same line as well as the poem as a whole. Good one!

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-11-01 11:34 AM

Sy, could that be a golden ring?

Well done my friend

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-11-01 03:43 PM

*library*

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

8 posted 2001-11-01 03:51 PM

i truly truly believe you.... indeed it is...

and you've said it with style, passion, and superb phrasing.

nicely done, sir Sy

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2001-11-01 04:00 PM

The tears that you shed today
Will lantern your tomorrow.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Priceless....love it Sy! Thank you for this one! ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2001-11-01 04:38 PM

Sy, you are a lantern bright
your poetry is of such delight
that moon and stars are pale jests
compared to your poetic best

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2001-11-01 11:11 PM

hey????
where is my Stinky????
I need a *winkie winkie*
No not from Randy he wont do...
I need to hear from groovy you

I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever ... you still take my breath away ...

Balladeer

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12 posted 2001-11-01 11:25 PM

You've become a sage, Sy. I am in "Awwww.."

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

13 posted 2001-11-02 09:06 AM

Such wisdom you do have. Thank you, for giving it to me today.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2001-11-02 09:29 AM

Sunshine, Thank you sweet *L*

JM, You are my non fattening sweet. WW S

Lady, You are welcome sweet lady. *L*

Startime, You are a bright star. *L*

Dan, Thank you sir.

Interloper, Could be LOL

Doreen, Thank you poetess. *L*

Nancy, Lovely comment thank you. *L*

Martie, you are Mrs Delight. *L*

JM, I'll have to write you an Email. WW S

Balladeer, Your spelling of awwwww put me on the floor.

SmartChick, Thank you for reading my humble poetry. *L*

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

15 posted 2001-11-02 12:12 PM

Seymour~ *sigh* You have much wisdom to impart....I could feel the truths behind each line. Beautiful flow and rhyme here sir...much enjoyed!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2001-11-02 04:10 PM

Smitten,
Wonderful comment, thank you so much. *L*

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