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Father Of Mine
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Father Of Mine |
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Greg28 New Member
since 2000-06-30
Posts 4 |
Wow, how time has passed, can you stll remember running through the tall grass. I know your time is coming soon. but please, not in this passing moon. Your faith is high' so they say, so i will still hope and pray. When you reach the other side, Tell your son that his brother says hi. Your Son. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is wrenching and tugs at the heart. sad but beautiful, welcome "back" to Passions. I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Greg, This is very touching. So well done. Bless you! (I wrote a poem titled Son of Mine) Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such a heartfelt poem. What a wonderful tribute to your father. Your love for him shines in every word you have written. Thank you for sharing it with me.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ouch. This one has a bit of a sting to it. I sense you miss your brother a lot, but hope you take comfort int he fact that he is in a better place. Great expression of emotion here. Welcome to Passions, Greg!! All writing comes |
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