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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Silently I looked into the dark of night but not to see anything of earthly sight My mind did still hear the words you said all the thoughts stirring around in my head You knew in your whispers of the eve before that you would draw me back, to past's open door The dominos of memory tumble before me, to lay on the baize table top for me to see In scattered shining of ivory divine drawing my hand to make a pattern out of time Out of the jumbled shimmering pieces lay I slowly fit the pieces where they may Do i pause on the double nine or take the double one or am I mocked as I wait for the rising sun To close my eyes would be better yet for the pieces all fit in perfect set Shuffle around in any which way they all still slide back in that faraway day Finally sleep will close my eyes to the tune of forgotten sighs And in my dreams, you came as you said where once more, you held my hand in gentle led To a glen of wonderous delight that lasted us both all through that night |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
in the dominoes of fates that be a story unfolds that we would see a game of chance, the begin of start now tell us more straight from your heart |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh Logan, I love this  you write so wonderfully! This is fantastic |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
hey this made me hungry for pizza! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And in my dreams, you came as you said where once more, you held my hand in gentle led To a glen of wonderous delight that lasted us both all through that night ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beautiful dear Logan. A wonderful romantic ending to this write. Enjoyed this as I always do...whatever you write. *soft smile and a gentle hug* Nancy Lee. ~Time has cast a spell on you, So that you won't ever forget me.~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Lady, but a gentleman never tells..very gentle smile, but thanks for the words SEA, very gentle smile, I do thank you, but I have a long way to go to come up to your own wonderous themes Robert A, gentle smile, sometimes dreams do that to one..Thank you for being here Ahh, Nancy Lee, I am glad you did, and you are do kind to say so..hug back to you with a very gentle smile |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I really liked the way you incorporated the domino effect into this, both creative and heartfelt. A wonderful poem Logan!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: gooooood question!!!!!!! i loved this!!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Logan, I like this lots, always happy to hear more dreaming going on.. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan-- When you close your eyes...the dominos fall where they were meant to..and memory lights your dreams. I wish you many dream's sweet like this beautiful poem. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* now this just makes my friday night absolutely perfect. I will go to bed with the romance of this poem playing in my head. This one is a keeper for sure. Thank you. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I knew you had a soft, romantic side to you. smile . . . very well done, my friend. All writing comes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Seems I only live in dreams these days....hugs to heart, Logan. |
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