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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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someone write a poem for me? in meter of tranquility-- tell me lies and say I'm loved-- enfold my heart in wings of dove. Let me sleep tonight in peace-- believing that someone loves me. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
riding on my bike i can only say i like from here i am alone is there someone there at home? |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
ha, ha. Cute Karen, real cute!!! now is the next day. I thought you wrote this in response to duncan's "to someone". just read your post though, and you didn't. So that's why the ha ha response last night. Now I see ya got em all writing poetry for you!!!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You are very much loved, dear one. Your poem cries out the yearning of your soul and I am sure someone will write you a romantic poem to let you know you are loved. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I will write you a poem ... but I wont tell you lies Not to you ... for I have seen my own reflection in your eyes You dont need anothers words ... to set you free All you really need ... is to see the beauty in you I see ~*~ some day baby....we will write our own happy endings and lullabies....  meI can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
In meter of tranquility I'll write a poem for you to tell you that you will be loved but tell a lie that I won't do  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Edwin McCain~ "Write Me a Song" From the CD -- "Far From Over" Kelly is raising her son His dad left just after the birth Now she's living on child support checks I guess that's all that man was worth She said I just need a man who will love me But they all just want one night of sin I know life could be better I just don't know where I should begin She said write me a song One that makes all the girls cry And the old women swoon At the sound of my tune And the hearts of the lonely will fly Yeah, they'll fly Beth, she sings straight from the heart She's hidden her tracks very well But these days she's falling apart And it makes me feel just like hell She says, boy, you can't imagine my life The death and the drugs and the pain And though I keep running ... I just can't seem to break from these chains She said write me a song Fill it all up with words Like brilliant and heavenly Make it sound just like me Just like the first time I love you was heard And now write me a song One that makes all the girls cry And the old women swoon At the sound of my tune And the hearts of the lonely will fly We're all feeding our lonely Like it might go away ... Like the doors of heaven would swing wide If we could just find the right words to say... She said write me a song She said write me a song She said write me a song She said write me a song ............ I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you are your own poem. . . in a meter of your own. . . well done my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Roses are red Violets are gone You're loved, you're loved, You're loved, you're..*yawn*....  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
serenity, If it's love you want than lies won't do, Afterall, tranquility has meaning for you. But sleep in peace tonight you sweet dear, Knowing real true love could be very near. Sleep tight.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well...you guys sure know how to spoil a pity party!!! thank you....ME WUVS WOO. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
How did I miss this? You are so tempting, Serenity but someones got the best of me all wrapped up in blanket warm afraid my heart has been stormed though it's my nature hope she won't mind i am a flirt of midnights kind Dare I say...loved this. And sure you are loved by many. Just pick one. I don't lie...just fantasize. [This message has been edited by Duncan (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If I knew for a fact that I was loved I wouldn't be able to sleep tonight...I would be too excited...anyway I think I am...but it is so hard to believe....James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Serenity, Serenity, tonight my dear Come rest a while without your fear Come love for love of tenderness Come share in words of sweet caress Come join with me in thought of peace Come dream a while your ache release For loved you are by many hearts And bound for love as each day starts I speak for love that comes your way A love of real that soon will stay For none are born to lonely be You’re loved; you’re loved, one day you’ll see And though the nights and bed are cold With hope you have your dreams to hold And warmth from heart that all can feel Some shining knight will come and steal Sincerely Rick Best of luck Serenity |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Not sure whether to laugh at myself or apologize with much embarrassment. How about I blame it on the cold pills? Perhaps...great minds think alike. I'm just digging myself deeper, huh? Ok...great poem Serenity. Why didn't I just say that to begin with? lol |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
I'm sending hugs to you today so you can feel what I have to say you are loved, no lie there! Just look at all the poets who care!  We love you! Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
nah, you don't want a lie do ya! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
me smiling now...and Rick? "bound by love" wicked me loves that line!!!! |
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