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Open Poetry #16

In Passionate Array

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-11-01 09:25 AM

In Passionate Array

Sharing the palettes
Painted from hearts
The seasons of two
A year of four parts

I share your autumn
You share my spring
You play the music
Words we each sing

Your autumn colour
Of orange and gold
My spring breezes
New blooms unfold

Your blanket white
Fall of winter snow
My soft white sand
On a summers glow

As seasons entwine
In passionate array
Affections we share
With loving display

Hope © 2001

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-11-01 09:34 AM

Very nice!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-11-01 09:45 AM

*sigh* so beautiful. I love it. You express love so wonderfully that I am always left in awe of you.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-11-01 09:51 AM

Beautiful use of nature's plan in your piece.

Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2001-11-01 09:54 AM

Thanks sunshine for your kind reply
Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2001-11-01 09:55 AM

Hi thanks Karen , I just let my heart fly *Wink*
Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2001-11-01 09:58 AM

thanks Interloper , yes with love and reason , we can share
every season
Hope

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

7 posted 2001-11-01 08:53 PM

As seasons entwine
In passionate array
Affections we share
With loving display

I love th play with fall and passion. It is all to often only written of as a spring event.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-11-01 09:12 PM

Excellent poem Hope....I wish I could see
your land just once in my life....I am
sure pictures don't adequately describe it.

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