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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-10-08 07:49 PM

This mutual need, between you and I
Complete devotion to your every sigh
My heart beats in rhythm, in perfect time
With you my love,  the reason for my rhyme

Your breath upon my skin, in whispers warm
Is but the calm, before the raging storm
Building and brewing, starting deep within
From just the slightest of touch, upon skin

Energy flowing with powerful need
As we cling to each other, hot with greed
Both consumed, burning with  mutual ache
So ready, both wanting, this love  we make

Collapsing, colliding breathless and spent
Sleepily sated,  the storm does relent

~SEA~

*my inspiration

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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-10-08 08:03 PM

Energy flowing with powerful need
As we cling to each other, hot with greed
Both consumed, burning with  mutual ache
So ready, both wanting, this love  we make

Ahem Lordy Girl! this is Phew... very very nice.

Love it!

Maree

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-10-08 08:06 PM

My stars, SEA, you are gonna start passions brewing within Passions here. Fantastic write, of which I always see from you..very gentle smile

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2001-10-08 08:36 PM

the storm should never relent

lovely inspiration SEA, your words are very calming.....poetry indeed...

Lauren~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-08 08:37 PM

Susan, you just KNOW I love this!!
Just read your inspiration and.....well....
Enjoyed, enjoyed.

Hugs, Nancy

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-10-08 08:42 PM

Sea, this is beautiful...

*smiles*

~Tier

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2001-10-08 09:02 PM

A very lovely sonnet, my sweet friend. Wonderful!

(((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2001-10-08 09:58 PM

I love sonnets Sea, and this one is no exception. Simply beautiful.

Dee

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2001-10-08 10:00 PM

A most beautifully passionate sonnet, well expressed!

I love it!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-10-08 10:02 PM

blow strongly storm. . . and never relent. . .

well done. . . simply wonderful. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

WhiteKnight
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 83
NY

10 posted 2001-10-08 10:45 PM

As always beautiful poem SEA...

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2001-10-09 12:23 PM

Wow, what a storm. I could use some more of those. Wonderful imagery. Thanks,
Larry C

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

cottage
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

12 posted 2001-10-09 01:54 AM

what a passionate write ...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

13 posted 2001-10-10 10:42 AM

like a hurricane
energy spent, then rebuilds
as its source warms up

You, gal, are the source of my inspiration and I am honored by your magnificent work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2001-10-10 10:47 AM

enjoy

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

15 posted 2001-10-10 10:55 AM

ahem, Susan - Lordy, girl! Yer supposed to be above all this lusty stuff (in my chauvinistic way of thinking, I have always placed you, chaste, upon the loftiest of pedestals). Now I see, all this worshipping from afar has gained me naught. Sighhh - A very sweet poem, nevertheless *sniffles*

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

16 posted 2001-11-01 03:37 PM

This is absolutely beautiful. Bet it was done in moonglow.

Let thy moon arise. William Blake

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

17 posted 2001-11-01 04:40 PM

well, I for one, think it's great to let go.....express yourself (tastefully) of course, which you did!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2001-11-01 07:31 PM

Beautifully written and powerful words of
love for another....Done very well Susan.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

19 posted 2001-11-01 07:35 PM

goodness, thank you all very much

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

20 posted 2001-11-01 08:10 PM

Beautiful.....and wonderfully passionate..

I loved it Sea.....You have such a wonderful beating heart dear friend..

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

21 posted 2001-11-01 09:03 PM

What a beautiful poem this is. I just love it.

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