What Remains - inspired by Marge

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Open Poetry #16

What Remains - inspired by Marge

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-09-24 11:47 AM

tang of salt comes crisp to me,
as do many memories
while castles still gleam abright
my shore shall steal away in night
taking with it dreams of true
'tis then that I still hold to you...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-09-24 11:55 AM

Oh so lovely...enjoyed!

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

2 posted 2001-09-24 11:57 AM

Sounds like Marge may be your muse to inspire this piece...I love sand castles and dreams and poem with both.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-09-24 12:00 PM

very nice.... as usual.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-09-27 01:27 AM

Lady In White-
   Lovely thoughts, my friend.
   Enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-09-27 04:09 AM

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2001-10-19 10:44 AM

Thank you for your thoughtful comments. Marge is an inspiration to so many poets...

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

7 posted 2001-10-20 04:33 PM

You both are....so special!!!

Sincerely,
Regina

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2001-10-20 06:42 PM

Castles of dreams with memories filled with love. I am glad the good memories remain. I love the way you wrote this poem.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-10-20 07:05 PM

(big hugggssssss) Your beautiful enchanting words always build castles and you are always the lovely queen of them all, just like our sweet Marge! (smiles) You both write the most beautiful visions! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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