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Is this too much to ask?
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Is this too much to ask? |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
 My nakedness speaks in open syllables. Whispers swirl and blend into braids along my fingers. You..... you..... strip my soul I want to be with you. I want to unfurl the paths that lead to where you are- boil into the whole of you stretch into serenade over you watch the moon rise with you, bathe with you in bejeweled waters, dance with you beneath gauzy clouds. But most of all I want to swim with you, into a sea of sensuality, where your ephemeral strength meets my flow. Is this too much to ask? www.mit.edu/~mer/gallery/ -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- Anna [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-20-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Many lovely lines of seduction...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And I wish I had written this as it speaks of all of my longing...big sigh Lady S! It is exquisite agony that you write of!  |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
James, thank you for reading. Just exploring a part of me that was never expressed.... Serenity, longing....ah, what poetry to be written! (what love to be made!) Thank you for replying. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Such a beautifully seductive poem of sweet passionate love! (smiles) You always write such timeless love poems so beautifully! (big hugggsssssss) May he always give your golden heart all the love you could ever ask for! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!<br><br>May love and light always shine upon you!<br><br>Love,<BR>Noah Eaton</center></font></div></span><br>
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Startime |
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada
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WOW!!!!This is some sensual invite you have given in this poem. I don't think it is too much to ask of him at all and I bet if he gets to read this he will melt into you willingly. MAGNIFICENT WRITING HERE. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. | ||||
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wow!!!! you got it bad!! last time i had it bad i got it good... rofl... er, i mean,..... dis be BAD!! umm.. which means, GOOD stuff here Lady now... go get it!!! why not? life is short |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Noah, thanks I think!!! startime, thank you for reading and I believe I expressed myself entirely true! Doreen, yes, but I cannot swim!!! Thank you for reading. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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