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notes of Pan
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notes of Pan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There is this thing in me that fights-- a quill in ink of well of plight... something in me picks at scabs-- to bleed for you the stuff of "AM." No other place do I do this-- forked tongue of serpent's kiss-- confession be the blood of bliss- words in play, the notes of Pan... Calling song of Hercules (see me now, upon my knees) I will trade strife of symphony for simple sonnet on demand. Listen, love, to varied voice-- chill of charlatan's rejoice... Listen, love, feel my hand near my breath on ember--spark--revered... I'll cradle you within my hands and burn my flesh to understand acrid scent of skin in burn is but the smell of lessons learned... I'll hold the coal till bone shows through-- for there I find my strength-- in YOU. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Calling song of Hercules (see me now, upon my knees) I will trade strife of symphony for simple sonnet on demand. Listen, love, to varied voice-- chill of charlatan's rejoice... Listen, love, feel my hand near my breath on ember--spark--revered... I'll cradle you within my hands and burn my flesh to understand acrid scent of skin in burn is but the smell of lessons learned... I'll hold the coal till bone shows through-- for there I find my strength-- in YOU. ================================ *shaking me head at you AGAIN* YOU ARE POETRY K.A. poetry in motion....  meThis distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
From your poetry I have learned that you have learned many lessons and still your heart pours out words of magic to touch all who read them. BRAVO!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, I'm impressed, I hope he is? Well done. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very interestng read, and enjoyable. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Another amazing write from your pen. Your imagery of thoughts never ceases to amaze me If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Such a wonderful poem that touches the heart and understands the strength and loyalty of what life is. (big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! Your words always teach us so much, dearest Karen! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet serenity, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
WOW! An incredible piece Serenity ... powerful imagery and phrasing throughout! Very much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Serenity, this is a very powerful write and very well done indeed. Great imagery here. ~Nancy~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Wow, a very powerful piece K, and the imagery is exceptional! Maree |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, this is a powerful poem.....You have said it well. A magnificently awsome read. |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
thank you!! you honor me and my father.......  nice job with this beware pandora's box... |
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