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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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I gave… I gave you a perfect daughter, So that I didn’t have to be… A faceless mirror of complexion, Is what I tend to be… The brightest colors of newest love- Seem to fade into reality… You see me as a different person- Still inside it’s only me… Concrete example of loves pure form- I still cherish the air that you breathe… Peer into deepest emerald divine- See only what you believe… Search the deepest folds of eternity- And still you’ll find me there… Gazing at you in bewildered delight- Loving you through only a stare… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Our children, our marriage, or lives in general are an extension of that reality. What's important is the way we see ourselves. Now don't get me wrong, I don't always like what I see, it's just that some days I like her better than others.  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes, you gave from your heart and what love is all about is both giving and receiving love. This is a beautiful poem. Very well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
perfect of course. . . what other way could there be??? wonderful my friend. . . good to see you back. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
dev o yuh good to see you and nice write o yuh |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely poem, lots of emotion pouring out. Sandra |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Just wanted to thank you all for your replies...seems like everything rotates competely with the wonderful addition to our family!!! Mommies and Daddies need some time together too!!! To Sven & Walt...tis good to hear from you my dearest of friends!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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