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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-11-04 10:06 AM



I'm as close and far from
love as I'll ever be
Sleeping here
next to me
is the love of my life
Is good to think
that I have
what I've yearned for
But on some nights
when the mood is right
my love wanders into
the world
Gets lost in the crowd
far from me
He keeps his distance
I smell his scent
but cannot touch him
Hurt
I feel unloved


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
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1 posted 2001-11-04 10:13 AM


Your words ring so true with so many people.You did a great job.Keep it up.
Peaches

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2001-11-04 10:16 AM


Oh gosh, my heart goes out to you. Maybe sharing this with him will help him to understand how you are feeling. I hope that soon you feel secure in your love with him. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-11-04 11:44 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, this is so so sad, my heart goes out to you and I pray he can understand how you feel. (sad sigh) Yes, share this with him and maybe he will understand. (sigh) So sad but touching, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May loveand light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

4 posted 2001-11-04 11:57 AM


If it was a perfect world, he'd never leave your side...and your chihuhua really would be a gator.  Good write, walker.
EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
5 posted 2001-11-04 11:58 AM


As unloved as you MAY feel, remember that you are ALWAYS loved, in good times and in bad
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2001-11-04 12:10 PM


Powerful write, walker.  May he see the love he has and show it to you until you feel secure in it.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
7 posted 2001-11-04 12:29 PM


This is so touching. I have this feeling too. Thank you for sharing.
vandana
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8 posted 2001-11-04 12:31 PM


enjoy
Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
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South Carolina, USA
9 posted 2001-11-04 12:53 PM


We have all experienced this feeling of
loneliness.  If a bird flies,  let it go.
If it returns,  well....anyway...a tough
feeling and a tuff choice...  Well said.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
10 posted 2001-11-04 05:34 PM




Wow....this touched me so deeply.
A really wonderful touching piece..

Thank you
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