Open Poetry #16 |
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As close and far from love as I'll ever be |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I'm as close and far from love as I'll ever be Sleeping here next to me is the love of my life Is good to think that I have what I've yearned for But on some nights when the mood is right my love wanders into the world Gets lost in the crowd far from me He keeps his distance I smell his scent but cannot touch him Hurt I feel unloved |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Your words ring so true with so many people.You did a great job.Keep it up. Peaches |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh, my heart goes out to you. Maybe sharing this with him will help him to understand how you are feeling. I hope that soon you feel secure in your love with him. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, this is so so sad, my heart goes out to you and I pray he can understand how you feel. (sad sigh) Yes, share this with him and maybe he will understand. (sigh) So sad but touching, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May loveand light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
If it was a perfect world, he'd never leave your side...and your chihuhua really would be a gator. Good write, walker. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
As unloved as you MAY feel, remember that you are ALWAYS loved, in good times and in bad |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Powerful write, walker. May he see the love he has and show it to you until you feel secure in it. ![]() All writing comes |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so touching. I have this feeling too. Thank you for sharing. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
We have all experienced this feeling of loneliness. If a bird flies, let it go. If it returns, well....anyway...a tough feeling and a tuff choice... Well said. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wow....this touched me so deeply. A really wonderful touching piece.. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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