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For Startime . . . Chlng response #7 . . . Dancing in moonlight

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-31 12:15 PM

Dancing in moonlight
The rise and fall of a waltz
Circling left then right
~*~
stars shine upon us
my eyes never leaving hers
lost in their beauty
~*~
I’m slowly drawn in
Drawn to her sweet ruby lips
Electricity
~*~
then the music stops
slowly we walk hand in hand
into the garden
~*~
we sit on the bench
surrounded by rose bushes
she looks in my eyes
~*~
again our lips meet
softly at first then with need
I pull her closer
~*~
her body leaning
pressing hungrily to mine
we slide off the bench
~*~
I am mortified
the thorns are unforgiving
alas, so is she

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-31-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-31 12:33 PM

OH NO!!! Not again! My you are quite accident prone aren't you?

Perhaps she will forgive you in time....tee hee.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2001-10-31 12:34 PM

hehehe, you have the worst luck sir!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-31 01:47 PM

*giggling wickedly* if your kisses are as good as your writing I would have no problem forgiving you.

I LOVE IT.....THANK YOU VERY MUCH.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-10-31 03:30 PM

You are having some real problems, hm? Ha Ha, good one, once again.
Sandra

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2001-10-31 03:38 PM

Oh dear, even the moonlight isn't giving you an equal chance.

But, this is well written anyway. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-10-31 05:50 PM

"again our lips meet
softly at first then with need
I pull her closer"

sigh

(jealous, jealous, jealous)

LoveLetters
Junior Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 35
State of Hope

7 posted 2001-11-01 08:16 PM

Cute this is!

So many women, so many passionate words. Tell me, are you going to write for them all, or is there a list?

WOnderful. I've been following your series..just not replying.

Love has many masks. I am but one of them.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2001-11-01 08:28 PM

Poor Startime, all that passion, all that romance, then what does she get??? He runs away cause of a few thorns????

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2001-11-01 08:51 PM

You have so much bad luck. But, I think she will forgive you.

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