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One Step at a Time
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One Step at a Time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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One step at a Time One step at a time We temper illusion and Question conclusion. One step at a time We step to heaven or hell Or a neither dwell One step at a time Phantoms fantasy cobwebs Our flow and our ebb One step at a time Circles propensity to A changed entity One step at a time Sends us day by day into Eternities way. Being and ending Constantly shifting the prime One step at a time. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ahh my King of Senryu/Haiku you wrap wisdom around your syllables and we reap the benefit  Thank you for the dish of wise-rice this morn it went well with me raspberry tea *winkiewinkie*  meThis distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
sure, "one step at a time" the way we all learned to walk as babies. I love this one! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! I like this. You are very good at writing haikus. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!You are so very right. It is all done one single step at a time. I love this. It makes anything seems possible when you only have to start with one step.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Did it snap crackle and pop? Winkiewinkie Lady, Thank you for the lovely response. SmartChick, Big thank you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and the trick is, remembering to go forward... thank you for this! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, You get a gold star, go to the head of the class. *L* Sunshine, You got that right. *L* [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 10-31-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
One at a time, one more breath at a time..to get to the next. Enjoyed. Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat and Vandana, Thank you both for the read and reply. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The beauty of your words is matched only by the wisdom they impart. *S* This is lovely, Seymour! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Seymour~ The rhyme and flow of this emphasize those small steps taken one at a time...a perfect philosophy of life Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thank you my sweet for the lovely. Krista, Exactly, *L* |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You speak of such agility in your write...you know I don't have any coordination...but I'd give it a shot just to follow along with you! I'll take baby steps. You always have so much insight in your poetry. Appreciate you Sy.Sincerely, Regina |
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