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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-31 08:46 PM


We wake to greet the morning
I say goodbye and kiss your cheek
As you leave to go to work
Not 'til the evening will we meet

Three words that say 'I love you'
So seldom now are told
As I sit at night and wait for you
How much I need your hand to hold

But together we've had many good times
And they far outweigh the bad
There's one thing I know for certain
You're the best friend I've ever had

For you I'd scale the highest mountain
Or plunge into the deepest sea
Your gift of love is priceless
For you mean the world to me

So no matter what life has in store for us
I know our love will see us through
I just wanted you to know
For you there's nothing I wouldn't do

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2001-10-31 08:51 PM


Sue,  such great devotion and love well
expressed.  this is a strong point of your
writing and I enjoy how easily you pen your
words.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
2 posted 2001-10-31 09:57 PM


MAGNIFICENT!!! Such love and devotion is a pleasure to read. I love it.  
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2001-10-31 11:26 PM


Yes and yes again!  There is nothing better than the unconditional feelings in love.  


Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2001-10-31 11:43 PM


Magnus
How gracious are you words, thank you so much.  

Startime
I'm so glad you liked this, thank you.

BluesSerenade
Thanks for taking the time to read this and I'm glad you liked it.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
5 posted 2001-11-01 07:47 AM


Another one for "Sue's Greetings" that should be in stores for all to share with their loved ones. You always have just the right words! Hugs to you and yours.  

Sincerely,
Regina

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2001-11-01 08:14 AM


What a beautiful tribute to one you love so dearly Sue ... very much enjoyed these lovely sentiments!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

SmartChick
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7 posted 2001-11-01 08:17 AM


Wonderful! I can see the love in your heart as I read this.
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