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Traces of Loneliness
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Traces of Loneliness |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Traces of Loneliness The best cure for loneliness is a nice warm female plopped right on top of you looking directly into your eyes saying something like this... "Hey lonely what you doing tonight...I want to spend some time with you." If that doesn't get every piece of your attention then what will? That would tend to get me all excited and give me a thrill. After a kiss or two she would proceed to make her next move. Assuming of course she fit within the flow of the mood. Somewhere in the middle of a moment in sensual happiness of bliss I would kiss parts of her other than her lips. My hands would gladly lead the way finding fresh places where my lips would desire to lay. Be my hands so bold as to caress her breast my lips would soon share in the silky softness they possess. And while my hands proceeded from mountain peaks to lush valleys below my lips would eagerly be desiring to taste the sweetness of passions warm flow. And somewhere in the middle of my sweet lovers caress I am sure I will have lost all traces of loneliness. JamesLee October24 2001 |
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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada |
I've never dreamt of a woman plopping herself atop me cuz where I come from they're more likely to land both feet in steel toe boots right into the middle of your chest. And then smile. Foreplay by any other name... Kevin |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Well, yes, I can certainly see that this scene would wipe away all traces of lonliness!!! Now I'm off to take me a cold shower after this one!!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!! What can I say to this poem? Its heat has me sitting up and taking notice. *giggling* Now I am truly awake but have to have a cold shower instead of a hot one. Magnificent. I love it.  A sure cure for loneliness indeed. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good grief James....this gets things warmed up real nice this morning  reeeeeeeal nice  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, A short version of Phanton of the opera? LOL Enjoyed the read. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a sure and quick way to lighten the loneliness James. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I'm on my way to Hawaii -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice....very nice....sneaks right up in front of you and plops in your lap. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all so much...funny the thoughts that go through my head when a woman straddles my legs...James |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
James, Well now! Yes.. I would say that is one way to overcome loneliness.. *chuckles* Good sensual write Hugs, Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Tara it works every time...James |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
*gigglez* now i know what i could do when I'm lonely ^.^ |
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