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Open Poetry #16

Like glowing amber

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-31 07:30 AM

You touch my heart
You tease my eyes
like glowing amber
In a crowded room
our eyes lock
And for a minute
we are alone
kissing
lusting
yearning
for love
Then we're back
in this lonely room
full of people
Ashamed
we both look away

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-31 09:43 AM

mmmmmm showing love should never cause shame. Put a smile on your face and a twinkle in your eye and kiss her again.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Amber Dawn
Junior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 22
Minnesota

2 posted 2001-10-31 10:07 AM

A moment captured very well....This is excellent!

Robert A
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 174

3 posted 2001-11-01 01:27 PM

made me think of a bonfire!!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-11-01 01:32 PM

mmm...should never be a reason for shame. Love is wonderful is it not?? *w*
wonderful write.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2001-11-01 02:14 PM

Hey! Now this has to top my favorites list from you...very well put!\

jwesley

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-11-01 02:18 PM

You beautifully captured a moment yet, I agree that there need be no shame on you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-11-01 02:42 PM

Happy sensual moments...James

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

8 posted 2001-11-01 03:18 PM

ashamed? why???

a precious moment captured here.... enjoyed this, walker

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