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Romancing This Love
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Romancing This Love |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Romancing This Love Darkness crept across the hallow of skies As would the panther in shadows of surprise The hands of destiny swept the stars of night Across the face of passion in blinded sight Neptune's breath whispered against lips of tide Caressing our feet between each timid stride Swirls of anticipation met with strands of breeze Brushing against moments our hearts would seize Each pulse of passion echoed through waves of lace Enticing the infinite boundaries of our first embrace Rays of dawn spilled kisses across morning dew Romancing this love ... I have found in you Mark Christopher I have found in you ... a reflection of me ... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Mark, this is so precious.....well penned here! Just beautiful.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is stunning...I would highlight a favorite line, but I'd just have to copy the whole poem again, so I'll just say it is stunningly beautiful. |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
Being new at writing myself, I can appreciate your obvious talent. Very nice writing, I enjoyed reading it. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Across the face of passion in blinded sight I love those lines.....excellent imagery you've used here Mark. I love the celestial feel to it...very magical  All in all, a lovely write!Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 10-31-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A wonderful read Mark...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
SO beautiful, Mark, happy to see your words here again.. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romance is so wonderful and you capture it beautifully in this poem. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--The way you write your love is full and wonderous and so beautiful! Hugs and love to you, my friend. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HeySweetThang~ 'Each pulse of passion echoed through waves of lace' And I'm just going to say - Awwwwwwwwwww ! Love ya'  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Pretty nigh perfect poem you've penned here, cowboy... Your inspiration is a lucky gal! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The hands of destiny swept the stars of night Across the face of passion in blinded sight Neptune's breath whispered against lips of tide ===================================== Swirls of anticipation met with strands of breeze ======================================== Each pulse of passion echoed through waves of lace ========================================= Rays of dawn spilled kisses across morning dew Romancing this love ... I have found in you =========================================== Well my king of Romantic images and verse... you make it hard to pick a fave line here... When you are well inspired...we gain the gifts... we do so love ya in love MC...for when your pen writes your heart ... we get to warm in its glow. This is a gem my friend ... an ethereal beauty and swoon and sigh just waiting to happen Your muse is a lucky lady  Thanks for indulging our wishes and stopping in...you are missed here poet cowboy love ya groovy guy jm This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
very tender words, indeed -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow, I could not pick a favorite line it is all so beautiful, thank you for this lovely poem, she is a lucky girl! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Rays of dawn spilled kisses across morning dew Romancing this love ... I have found in you ------------------- A lovely eloquent piece.. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Oh Mark, it is always special when you grace us with your presence And this poem is no exception. So touching and beautiful. Good to see you again. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- This is so sweetly beautiful. Love looks good on you, sweet friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mark, this entire piece is just lovely... simply enchanting! Well done, ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhhhhhhhhha Cowboy this is lovely! So nice to find this today just beautiful!! (((hugs))) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark, It is such a treat when I see a new poem You write so romantic *sighs* I enjoyed.Hugs, Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is incredibly romantic..I hope your muse has read this and given you a big hug and kiss for writing it!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Krista has picked my favorite lines Stunning! Liz |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Swirls of anticipation met with strands of breeze Brushing against moments our hearts would seize Each pulse of passion echoed through waves of lace Enticing the infinite boundaries of our first embrace Rays of dawn spilled kisses across morning dew Romancing this love ... I have found in you' Hey there, baby...reminds me of someplace I've been before... ...have I ever told you that you're the sweetest?? hmmm...could've sworn...  ...well, thanks for this, my sweetheart...you've penned a beautiful poem, as always...the cadence and rhyme--perfection...  ...k  And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Thank you all for your kind replies and your wonderful ways that you egged me to post one. I can't wait to get a normal schedule again so that I may indulge myself more ofter on all of your wonderful works. Thanks bunches again. And Kris..........you betcha sweetie. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Swirls of anticipation met with strands of breeze Brushing against moments our hearts would seize MarkSweeeeeeeeeeetie, this is absolutely beautiful and I'm soooooooo happy I found a poem 2nite that you've shared with all of us recently... MyohMy this is a keeper4mePoetFriend, but then again you probably knew that already cuz as a friend of mine you know just how much I enjoyNtreasure the exquisite heartfelt expression that I often find in your poetry.. MuaahOnCheeksNthanx4aSplendidRead *~coco~* |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is a very nicely written one. So sensual, so romantic, so loving.. |
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