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Just For You |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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I wished upon a falling star, tonight This wish I made, was just for you To put a special love into your life A love that will always be so true Someone to take away your sorrow And make your world be all bright Who will be there for you tomorrow And bring into your life some light A special person who will love you And always care about how you feel Who will always want to be there too To take care of you when you're ill This is a wish, that I did wish for you A love to make all your dreams come true © By Sue 11-2-01 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, What a generous poem! I really like this. Well done.  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
What a wonderful heart you have to make such a wish. This is beautiful, SmartChick, and shows us what a loving and compassionate person you are. ***hugs*** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this sonnet is sooooooo beautiful and will touch the heart of your friend so beautifully! (sigh) God Bless You, your beautiful heart shines with compassion and the magic of love! (sigh) Maybe someday I can have a love like this! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
To Larry C Thank you, Lrry! I am glad you liked it. To Startime Thank you, Startime! This wish is for everyone. I didn't think to post it that way. To Mistletoe Angel Thank you for the compliment. I am glad you like it. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sue, this is so sweet, and its the same wish I have for all of us, to have the right love in our life. Thanks for writing this. Sandra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for this wonderful wish! And you asked us to tell you what type of poem you write? It's the 'right' type... for my last read before tucking myself in tonight. Thanks! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh my!! This is so sweet... I really need this generous wish you've wished right now. My life seems so barren without love... ha... =P |
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