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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Screaming for one clean thought They're just too scrambled to make any sense Hate Love Confusion Fear Hope Nightmares All I want to do is run All I want to do is settle A home to run from A home to run to One man to push away One man to cling so tight Out of breath Fighting harder Something's got to fit this puzzle without matching pieces "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sometimes there really are too many pieces on the table at once. I have to step back, visualize the puzzle complete, then take a deep breath and look at each piece from a different perspective. The pieces somehow all fit together, eventually. A good poem. It made me think about the input overload we are all subjected to these days. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The jagged edges and rounded corners make it difficult to put together. There always seems to be a missing piece of the picture we had hoped to see. Good luck on getting them to fit. |
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