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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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0 posted 2001-10-30 11:21 AM


A New World

I see her
as I am walking
an alpine meadow:
the wind moves gently
the warmth of Summer
lingers everywhere;
the flowers filling the air
with fragrances;

as we move closer,
my heart starts pounding
my passion throbbing;
and as we touch,
fondle each other;
our passion, the love  we share,
creates a new world,
with no boundaries
a world we can return to
again and again
when the stress of Earth
brings us down.

© Copyright 2001 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-10-30 12:23 PM


Excellent writing...James
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2001-10-30 02:04 PM


The atmosphere in this was absolutely lovely.
All that urgency and anticipation just
about took my breath away!!!!!

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