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Uninhibited
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Uninhibited |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Wrap me in feather boas Heel me high in tilt Gloss the lips in shimmer Spin me round in silk Paint my nails in scarlet Twist my hair in soften curl Let me whisper secrets Drape my neck in pearls Lay me upon satin sashays Picture lazy breath Pour my glass with spirit Quietly giggling in happiness Better yet Let me be me Simply, easily, uninhibitedly Melt with you as one Never caring About anything That might come undone |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh Regina, this sings!!! Yes it positively sings. I love this piece. It conveys my thoughts today exactly. I love the excitement and imagery of the first verses, and I love the quiet satisfaction and peacefulness of the last verse. You have put my thoughts into words on this one, a wonderful piece to start my new week off. Did I mention, I love this piece??? 1:20pm I just reread this and realized I missed the point you were making. I love to dress up in heels and dresses, so when I read the first verses, it sang to me as a lady getting ready for a date or something, and she's so happy (ie: how I would feel getting ready to see my love). It didn't occur to me that this is not who this lady really is. Thought I'd come back and 'splain myself.  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (edited 10-29-2001).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Geez what about mixing it up once in awhile? Variety is after all........ You just be you, that'll be fine. Enjoyed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
All of it sounds beautiful to me, Regina, and written with love. Sandra |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Every woman should be this inhibited...it can only lead to bliss -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Better yet let me be me. . ." I wouldn't have it any other way Regina. . . great job, it flows with that spirt that you write about. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
STANDING OVATION!!!!  Free to be you!!!Now that is love....I absolutely love this poem. Your talent makes is shine with your unique heart. Magnificent. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Let me be me....all one could ever ask, and the only gift to give... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I agree with the lady of shallot. This is a wonderful feeling, to be ME. Lovely write Reg. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwww Regina, this is sooooooo beautifully lovely! (smiles) You always write love so well, your golden heart shines with its beauty! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, Lay me upon satin sashays Picture lazy breath Pour my glass with spirit Quietly giggling in happiness It doesn't get much better than that. *L* |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nice thoughts here, my friend. You do uninhibited well and with style. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Wow, so many fantastic lines, hard to pick a favorite. This is truly well written, no cliches'. Very nicely done. Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes....just be you...and soak up every bit of love you receive....Nicely said R. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Regina Such whimsical beauty you weaved from your vast array of words......so very romantic. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, Okay then...I'm off for a cold shower.  |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Very sensual. Great write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes and when I am with a woman and start thinking this way things definately will come undone...James |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Regina~ Oh what a wonderful feeling it is to be uninhibited...*especially* in love. To know that kind of love is one of the most beautiful things you can know. I am keeping this Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Tracey: Hey! That's okay. No need to splain! LOL! I love to dress up too...just love it more when I can be dressed to spill...if ya get my drift. Thank you for reading! Richard: Thank you for saying that..Seems those that need variety are various in their devotion as well. So smart you are! Catalinamoon: Thank you sweet Lady. I think you are great! LoShallot: Yes! Very much so bliss. Sven: I appreciate you for appreciating my spirit. You're listening again Karen: Thank you! I am just a sister of shine here as I so love your verse. Sunshine: Speaking of shine...You are gifted! Donna: A beautiful you! Makes me try harder! Noah: Hugs and Loves to you my sweet! Seymour: Such sweet comment Sy! You always make me smile. Michael: Thank you! Grateful that you think so! A W Caress: Thank you for saying that! I really appreciate you! Magnus: Like a sponge! Then ring me out and start over! Sue: Thanks so much for stopping in. You always make my day! Larry: Attack of the cold shower cootie virus? Good! Gotcha! Thank you for reading Dawn: I love the word sensual. It is so...sensual, can't replace it. Thank you so much! James:Good for you....you rascal...undone is fun! Krista: Grateful that you'd save anything of me. You are so sweet and lovely. Thank you. Sincerely, Regina |
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