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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Giving simplicity dwells within complication it’s separating the yoke from the white a path is a straight destination where wrong is known from the right all that was lost can be found it’s just remembering where it was left discovering when done right the end is quite profound giving without guilt is never considered a theft "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Helen....this is wonderful  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
giving without guilt is never considered a theft I love this piece...well done and oh so true! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
from the heart. . . which is where all good things are given. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ 'all that was lost can be found it’s just remembering where it was left' I will make sure I remember this~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Brilliant! So much truth! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
I LOVE this! Wonderful message..brilliantly written...and the rhyme/meter flows excellently. I'm bookmarking this one By the way, I've been meaning to tell you for awhile now, I really like your picture... very artistic and it seems to capture you (the "you" in your writings) well. That probably doesn't make sense lol but coming from am amateur photography buff, your pic is "appropriate" Write on! - Jeff |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Wonderful! |
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