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Open Poetry #16
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Hollowman
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0 posted 2001-09-24 04:19 PM


He moves amoungst the flock
he brain goes ticker-tock
no emotion, just silence
his feelings kept close
a soft stranger
a living ghost

Along the path to her heart
he knows how sharp she feels
private pain
memories linger on
as long as blood pumps through her veins

If he could just reach in
and remove her wounded heart
to save her from the past
and help her make a new start

But mortal he mearly is
and sadness he does not want her to feel
just kind, soft love
a dedication, tempered with steel
Richy
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1 posted 2001-09-24 04:26 PM

oh, this is sooooo wonderful! I loved the gentleness of this  
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