Open Poetry #16 |
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I've Never Stopped........... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Feelings flow As I feel Fall And my heart Awaits the call Ever soft Loving recall Of those days~ Of those last moments~ In suns fading rays As we went our separate ways vowing till forever ends that you and I would still be friends I kept my promise My words were true I’ve never stopped Loving you ~SEA~ |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ah, true blue...as befits the SEA. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Very sweet ... very you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So plaintive, just like the sound of the Sea... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Words of hindsight, honesty in review, oh to hear those words "I never stopped loving you..." Beautiful, SEA. |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
The Title says it all.... i loved this poem.. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I never doubted it for a minute, SEA ![]() |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
SEA..this is so sweet,is good... alan |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - softness sings your heart with a tender pen... BC |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this speaks to me today. . . thank you SEA. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, You write of friendship very well, as only a true friend would know how to. Peace to you this Sunday afternoon and warm (((hugs))) ![]() Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love it Sea..well done! [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 09-23-2001).] |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lovely write Susan. ~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Bittersweet and heartfelt. Good combination. Very easy to relate to. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
SEA~ Oh the feelings this evokes...beautiful, heart-felt write. Hugs, ~Krista ![]() |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Midnitesun~ thank you ![]() Marge~ ![]() ![]() Sunshine~ I just miss my friend ![]() RSEvans~ thank you so much ![]() GW_6~ thanks, I'm glad you liked this ![]() Balladeer~ ![]() Alan~ thank you very much ![]() BC~ that is sweet, thank you ![]() Sven~ thank you ![]() Michael~ and to you ![]() Charisma~ thanks sweet friend ![]() Mysteria~ thank you ![]() Duncan~ ![]() ![]() Krista~ thank you very much ![]() ~SEA |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
I'm really wordless - very touching. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And the other person? James |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Topheth~ wow, thank you for that ![]() James~ I don't know, I haven't heard from him in such a long time, but his birthday is soon, and I'm thinking I'll call...... ![]() ~SEA |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
that you and I would still be friends I kept my promise My words were true I’ve never stopped Loving you I like the "friends" and "loveing you" words here...thought provoking for some reason.. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
he was my best friend for so many years, I will always think of him, I will always miss him, and I will continue to love him, no matter what. ![]() |
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