Open Poetry #16 |
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Moments of Love Forever Gone |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
He took me to heaven a place I rarely visit. Oh that it could have been forever, immersed in his warmth holding back tomorrow which came all to soon. Even as I laid there replete with his bittersweet love I saw the end draw near and my resolve faltered My hands moved of their own accord They did not want to let go. Never wanted to say goodbye. I said I wouldn't cry. I lied. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sandra, my heart goes out to you! (sad sigh) My heart breaks in these sad words of lost love, and I too pray so much you cry, but in tears of joy to holding close to true loves heart forever! (sigh) I promise that very soon you will be embraced by such beautiful love that will lift you to paradise eternally! (big hugggssssss) My heart is with you always, sweet Sandra, I love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks Noah, Love you too, and I will be ok. Someday. Sandra |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra, the beauty of this (hard to see) is that you are writing about it. You are writing beautifully and expressing your feelings. Keep going, you will get there. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
none of us want to admit we cry..... Kathleen |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
And I will cry with you. Forever is a long time and with a love like you have to give there will be someone yet who can give as well as receive it. ***hugs*** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I know of a great way to forget these feelings, even if it is only for a while. We'll go to N'Awlins and drink, dance and be merry. We'll put that smile back on your face!!! *hugs* If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sandra, I wish there was something I could do to help rid you of this pain. But as long as you need to write about it, I'll be here to read and support. Dawn |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
Honestly written, nicely done. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
crying is a good thiing, a very good thing....healthy, cleansing...hands often don't want to let go..... but to write that line is light years ahead of those who don't understand the reality of having to before letting the tide sink your own ship very fine writing, sandra....... |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sandra, you took the words right out of my mouth this time. I once wrote, "When I told you I loved you, I lied. When I said I didn't cry when you left, I lied." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know the heartache and disappointment as you realize that another opportunity is lost but I also know that new moments of love can come very quickly to a heart that prepares itself for new opportunities...James |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Sandra, Words of comfort or wisdom fail me right now. Just know there are a lot of folks in here that know you are special and are wishing the best for you. Tears are good sometimes. They help wash away the bitterness. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Sometimes..we visit heaven with someone...briefly..because that is what it is..a dream...that might not have been if it were to last. There are moments for us that are like jewels that we will carry forever. Even if brief...still a shining moment. Thank you for reminding me of that. Sincerely, Regina |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, You have captured all the pain perfectly, unfortunately. I know just how you feel. There will be better days ahead, just don't stop believing..... Love, Elise |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
Lot of pain in these words, does it help to write it out? |
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