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Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 2001-10-28 05:47 PM

Pull me back into your warm embrace
help me put to rest my fears.
Let me touch again your handsome face,
reach and wipe away my tears.

So many trials have we both endured,
with bitter hearts we did inflict.
Let us kiss until our love's secured,
past pain that love will contradict.

Spoken vows that God will hold us to,
carry us through times of strife.
Let not friends and family judge us now,
your my husband.. I'm your wife.

My God knew before I knew of you
the paths in life that I would take.
The little things we both would do
and what a difference it would make.

We both have made mistakes my love,
but we need each other now.
And with the help we have from God above
we will make it through somehow.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2001-10-28 06:49 PM

Lucie,
Good poem. You express your feelings and emotions very well. You word choice and formatting are similarly beautiful.

Sincerely,
Titus

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-10-28 06:55 PM

Lucie...beautifully penned and so full of love, Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

3 posted 2001-10-28 07:09 PM

Lucie,

I could really feel the love pouring from the depths of your soul on this one. Thanks for sharing.

Dawn

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-10-28 10:30 PM

Proof that Lucie can pen fine love poems. Very, very nice, Lucie.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2001-10-29 12:05 PM

Lucie,
Very tender. A wonderful gift to your husband. Well done.

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

Keith Morgan
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 114
Md

6 posted 2001-10-29 12:43 PM

Beautifully written. The words were deeply felt and well placed. Good job!!!!!!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2001-10-29 08:45 AM

*sigh* A beautiful, heartfelt poem that touches the heart of the reader. Your talent truly shines when you speak of the love you have for your husband. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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