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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-10-27 04:47 PM


* This is fiction, I'm not in this state of mind right now *

I want someone to love
Someone to kiss
I need true love
Someone to miss

What is love, this thing I crave
I know pain is all I feel
This smile I show looks brave
but the pain in my heart is so real

Pain is the aching I feel
loneliness is all I embrace
If happiness is real
Why is pain all I face?

Love left me idle
I put on a chase
I have come so close
but pain is in it's place

My eyes become glossy
Sadness a focal point that makes me cry
My mouth once felt your lips
Now all they do is sigh

Someday I'll find a special love
I know I will
Sooner or later love will find me
but my heart is yours until

© Copyright 2001 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-27 04:59 PM


*sigh* do you ever have a way of putting your feelings on paper. This heartfelt call is beautifully said with a talent for speaking from deep within. I love it...and I can relate very well to your feelings.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-10-27 06:09 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Joanna, I know just how you feel, for all my life I've dreamed of loving a girl, and dream ever so much for loves first kiss from one with a loving and sensitive heart! (sigh) This day will come, sweet friend, for I know God is preparing the perfect angel for you to love very soon! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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