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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

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0 posted 2001-10-23 02:55 AM

Goodnight
I may dream of you
my head upon a solitary pillow
if I do
if you are there
sleeping deeply in my dreams
in my arms
sleep well
and know that
you will wake
loved
I may dream of you

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2001-10-23 03:01 AM

Duncan,
Nice write. But please, I'll pass if you don't mind or even if you do!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-10-23 03:40 AM

Duncan, how sweet! It seems as if we are all in dreamland tonight. A good place to be.
LOL at Larry's reply. But he will probably be in someone else's dreams anyway.

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

3 posted 2001-10-23 06:04 AM

This was very, very soothing and comforting to read...

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-10-23 07:26 AM

*sigh* I thought of writing a reply in verse to this. But how does one answer the perfect verse? Besides, I just awoke (from a strangley comforting dream, almost as though....), and am not quite coherent yet. Maybe later, I will think of something.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (edited 10-23-2001).]

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-10-23 07:33 AM

Good morning Duncan, sweet dreams? Great poem.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-10-23 08:02 AM

Nicely done Duncan... the style and form I have come to appreciate so much from you again captures a thought and feeling in a capsule for us all to enjoy.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2001-10-23 09:13 AM

mmmm and such pleasant dreams they were too, I bet. I love the way I could see you pulling her into your arms. *sigh* this poem is very much a soft and tender feel good poem. I love it. Here is a goodnight kiss for you.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2001-10-23 09:36 AM

A lady would be lucky, to slumber in these arms
To sleep this tender lullaby, rocked to sleep in charm
And as she woke in morning, after this dream of bliss
She'd gently lift her dreamy head, and seal it with a kiss

Did I tell you what an outstandingly beautiful poem this is?

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-10-23 06:35 PM

to dream and to wake of love
is to know the secret of the heart. . .

well done Duncan. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-10-23 06:51 PM

Great poetry Duncan....said well. Now,
share it with someone you love.

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

11 posted 2001-10-23 06:54 PM

very very lovely Duncan....

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2001-10-23 07:01 PM

Very beautiful, very romantic... ~NancyLee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

13 posted 2001-10-23 07:27 PM

~~~Sigh~~~

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

14 posted 2001-10-23 10:04 PM

Oh yes, and I do this as often as possible-dream of him. Perfect poem.
Sandra

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

15 posted 2001-10-23 10:16 PM

Beautiful...

~Tier

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

16 posted 2001-10-27 07:00 AM

Duncan-
   Ah yes...such a warm fuzzy kind of write.
   I'm liking this one lots.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

17 posted 2001-10-27 02:58 PM

Duncan,

I used to have someone to dream of holding in my arms. Now I just dream.

Dawn

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

18 posted 2001-10-27 04:53 PM

~Sigh~
"if you are there
sleeping deeply in my dreams
in my arms
sleep well
and know that
you will wake
loved"

You have captured all of our hearts with this soft tender romantic piece.....

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

19 posted 2001-10-27 05:14 PM

Duncan,
'sigh'...as a friend told me once while we were chatting.....I will sneak into your dreams.
Red

P>S> He did too. hehehhe Were very nice dreams....hmmmmm

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

20 posted 2001-10-27 06:10 PM

liked it

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

21 posted 2001-10-27 06:15 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! Your beautiful heart shines with sweet love for the woman of your heart! (big hugggsssssss) You always write romance so well, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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