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walker
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0 posted 2001-10-27 03:23 PM



I need your warmth
tonight
it will be cold
My room feels empty
without you
I need your sunshine
in the morning
I need your moon
at night
My love
I long for your touch
I want to hold you
so bad
I want to kiss
the sweetness that's you
I want to drink
your passion
I need your warmth
tonight
it will be cold.


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-10-27 04:00 PM


Yes walker once we feel anothers warmth we want to keep feeling it...James
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Gaia
2 posted 2001-10-27 04:05 PM


'I want to drink
your passion
I need your warmth
tonight
it will be cold'

A very warm invitation.

RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-10-27 04:14 PM


*Sigh* You, my friend, are so passionate!
I am getting hooked on your poetry, so keep them coming!

Startime
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4 posted 2001-10-27 04:50 PM


*sigh* your words are filled with longing to hold her close and share the warmth of love. *sigh* this is another one of your melting poems. Wonderful.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-10-27 07:00 PM




(sigh) Oh Walker, you always write passion and romance so beautifully! (sigh) May love always warm your heart and light your soul! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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6 posted 2001-10-27 11:41 PM


Yep, cold here, too.  I finally just decided to buy an electric blanket.  I can turn it on and off with just a button and it never argues with me or comes home late.
Good write, walker.

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
7 posted 2001-10-27 11:49 PM


ah yes, the best kind of warmth on a cold night are the arms of a special person. No electric blanket is a substitute for that

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

walker
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8 posted 2001-10-28 06:37 PM


Thanks all for your responses. Duncan I agree with you but when the night is cold or lonely there's no substitute for warm love.
DawnG
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9 posted 2001-10-28 11:49 PM


Walker,

I've been freezing all day long today, but have no one to hold to keep me warm.

                                  Dawn

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