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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-10-27 10:47 AM



Delight
Virginia Salter

did
you see
that
cauliflower
sky?
dawning
morning
awake.

azure
within
the folds,
ivory
ridges
gleaming
against
the
light

such
crispness
of view
I saw,
a vivid
and
ardent
sight

a
warmth
on which
to draw,
an
ending
to dark
of
night

delight!

© October 27, 2001

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-10-27 11:25 AM


Very descriptive, Virginia....I loved the images in here.  

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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2 posted 2001-10-27 11:31 AM


Oh yes.....how can I help but see it when you describe it so beautifully. Delightful. What a view of the sky this morning.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2001-10-27 11:54 AM


VAS,
This is truely a delight. *L*

Kevin Taylor
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since 1999-12-23
Posts 185
near Vancouver, BC, Canada
4 posted 2001-10-28 09:17 PM


I
love
your
sky!

Thank
you!

Kevin

"Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you get there."


DawnG
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5 posted 2001-10-28 11:18 PM


You have such a beautiful sky. Thank you for sharing it so vividly with your words.

                                     Dawn

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

6 posted 2001-10-28 11:44 PM


Love what you see, Virginia.  
Wish more would see it too.

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