Open Poetry #16 |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Go ahead peek right in, Be daring on this ride, In you I will confide, Walk with me to the edge, No need to hide, were near the edge, Leap, without knowing, Plunge right in to the dreams unwoven, Be bold beyond your wildest imaginations, Believe in yourself, Now you've accomplished one of the hardest things, We believe in everyone else, But what happened to the self, Go ahead take a chance, Oh no it's not circumstance, It's worth discovering, worth the haste, It's a new world, It's no more let's pretend, It's for real it's you. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Just makes ya wanna dive right in, doesn't it? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (edited 10-27-2001).] |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Tracey, I am the biggest by far, so mainly speaking to myself, when I wrote this, thanks for the read. Just as your quote says, this maybe insanity breeding, love that line. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
This makes lift up my spirit and makes really want to climb ...be bold..... "Be daring on this ride" A powerful piece..... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I know this is going to sound very strange but something about this poem makes me want to dance under the moonlight. (and not fully clothed either) A poem set to the tune of the wild beating of our hearts. BRAVO! ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() YAY!!! Yes, if we all believe in ourselves, we can achieve anything, and with each other, we can all make harmony! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet rose, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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