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ctowen
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0 posted 2001-10-23 11:34 PM


Body Language

First, attention must be achieved
just a way to take notice
a way one maybe perceived
for one time and yet timeless

A movement, the slight of hand
a little leg, a wisp of hair
fasionable by name brand
smiles that lure you to this lair

Body language, its the move
follow your instinct to find
all these gestures fit the groove
but I look past to the mind

The body is great to share
but heart and soul belong too
a package, candy to bare
for the mind makes it all you.



© Copyright 2001 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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1 posted 2001-10-23 11:53 PM


Good observant write. I often find that body language can also give a good clue to the mind though. But I agree wholeheartedly, it's the mind that counts

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

cherish
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2 posted 2001-10-23 11:55 PM


hear hear! good write ctowen, body language is sumtimes a tricky thing to figure out. take this one for example ~~> .   good write.


         

"......",said the wise mute.

RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-10-24 12:17 PM


*blinks an eye* Hmmm...am I winking at you or...do I have something in my eye? LOL

Good Write!


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ctowen
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4 posted 2001-10-24 12:30 PM


Tracey -
   Happy to hear we share similar thoughts!
      ( I was beginning to worry !!! )

Cherish -
   Pleasure to meet you. I'm not the most
   clever mind but do have a voyeuristic
   view. Thanks for the vote of confidence!

Rose Petal -
   I hope, either way, things workout okay.
   Appreciate all you have to share!

            Thanks Ladies !!!!  *s*

catalinamoon
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5 posted 2001-10-26 07:51 PM


Like this a lot, good observations.
Sandra

Startime
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6 posted 2001-10-26 07:58 PM


OH yes, body language can sure give the more intimate thoughts away. *giggling* I love the way you put this one together, Craig.    

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

snowpants
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7 posted 2001-10-26 08:57 PM


'The body is great to share
but heart and soul belong too'

Very cool lines, ctowen...great write overall, too!

sp  

And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

Enchantress
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8 posted 2001-10-26 09:00 PM


Good write Craig.  I knew it all along....guys like brains better, huh? lol.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Magnus
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9 posted 2001-10-26 09:01 PM


CT...nice write...too often attention is
paid to the physical side far tooooo much.
Usually a beautiful mind lies within,  
waiting to be caressed.  Thanx.

Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2001-10-27 07:18 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Yes, body language can always tell each other so much about ourselves, for our wants, our dreams, and how we think. (smiles) You always write such wonderful thoughts, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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