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Masquerade of Splendor
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Masquerade of Splendor |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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The times come again when I think of you I feel your heart beat upon my bare soul, your touch revealing my thoughts as lips brush together I see your face in views of shaded memories faded rose petals falling silently under midnights hue Your eyes could make the moment silent, like a winters night of freshly falling snow Beautiful My heart aches in a masquerade of splendor Our last dance I still feel every moment pulling me under becoming one again with the night I close my eyes to your enchantment, your radiance The brilliance of my anguish My words fade softly to silent whispers lay me gently down my heart is whole with yours **** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-22-2001).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I think we all have a few memories such as this, but not all of us could express them quite so beautifully. This is pretty, Lauren.  *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
You write your memories very well. Wonderfully done If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Our last dance I still feel every moment pulling me under becoming one again with the night I close my eyes to your enchantment, your radiance The brilliance of my anguish My words fade softly to silent whispers lay me gently down my heart is whole with yours =================================== *sigh* I didnt want this to end ... I could read your poetic whispers till I go blind. as always...your words touch me in places deep...thank you for that. beautiful writing and memories dear poetess Lauren  This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Greeneyes, An absolutely beautiful piece you have penned here. Thanks for sharing it with us and creating a memory in our minds. Dawn |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
A very nice read....memories....nice to have them. Red |
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OctoberSky Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 12 |
You are a masquerade of splendor in all your charm, dropping by to read how you perform your words for all to read in such beauty you know i  OctoberSky [This message has been edited by OctoberSky (edited 10-22-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Gracefully delicate~ Enjoying your thoughts again~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful tender memory poem. "Our last dance I still feel every moment pulling me under becoming one again with the night" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"When I think of you I feel your heart beat upon my bare soul. Your touch revealing my thoughts as lips brush together." I love the sensuality within your thoughts...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
....just lovely ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful mood so nicely written!! |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Greeneyes, you turn a phrase like the soft folds of warm cotton on a winter night...lovely work. Willie B |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I like this. Beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
As always LC, your words leave me with no words. I feel your heart when you write like this, and it is a beautiful heart that I feel. Thank you for always sharing your words Lady Lauren. HugggssssOn the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully penned from your heart..lovely as always Lauren.. ~Victoria~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the depth here is amazing. . . you've grown so much. . . and your writing shows the depth of your heart. . . beautiful Lauren, just beautiful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What Sven said and, ~*~ Lay me down gently sharing the slow rhythmic dream together we glow ~*~ Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes, A full palette of lovelies. Enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Michael~ I write from the heart, as I know most do....thank you so much for your words, always...be well my friend... Tracey~ Thank you for peeking in....I appreciate your thoughts... Janet Marie~ I never want it to end.... I hope you know how much I think of ya for always being so supportive of my words.... sweet poet...DawnG~ thank you for your kind words...very thoughtful for you to stop by.... Red-uni~ Indeed it is, especially memories that live in the heart...thanks Red... OctoberSky~ you are inspiration....Marge~ Thank you for enjoying this ,it adds a smile to my face....HUGS....be well... Midnitesun~ Thank you for feeling one of my favorite lines....and for enjoying.... JamesMichael~ Thank you for your thoughts....I appreciate you reading always.... Nakedthoughts~ Thank you, for peeking in....nice to hear from you... ethome~ Thank you my friend....your thoughts mean much to me.... WRBreezin~ Interesting name, I like it... your comment touched me, thank you.... Smartchick~ Thank you... Gentle Spirit~ HUGSSSSS sweet Donna....thank you for your encouraging words.... sweet lady....Victoria~ Thank you for your thoughts, such a nice smile it adds.... Sven~ Oh my friend, I cherish your comment....thank you ever so much... Interloper~ your words too are inspiring....thank you... I am humbled by your reply... Seymour Tabin~ A colorful palette of many thanks.... ~~~~~~ Peace and Love to all...Be Well, Be Safe... Greeneyes~ ****** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-22-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Greeneyes- What a lovely and tender write. Much enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
vlraynes~ I enjoyed your stopping by thank you very much for your thoughtful words.... Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-27-2001).] |
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