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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The years pass by uncounted but the minutes I know by name each second since I’ve loved you no measurement is the same The time it took to make a star means naught to me you see for in that star I find the love that I wish you had for me We’ve subdued the jungle beasts but my heart will not be tamed I’ll not hold back a nanosecond and thus said, I feel ashamed This love took not a moment to find a home within my heart I do not know when it will end nor am I sure when it did start The clock held within my heart doesn’t count time in normal space it’s measured in the times I’m held within your loving embrace |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Hey, I'm just a Passions reader for now and I loved this~~~~ Kathleen |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* written from your heart with a class and style all your own. This poem reveals the depth of a love that knows not the boundaries of time and space. It is a love filled with destiny. Absolutely Magnificent. Into my collection this treasure goes.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-27-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PoetdeVine, This cannot be improved upon, it is excellent. *L* |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
The sensitive romantic indeed measures time by the beat of the heart. When it races we wish it would slow, when it's pace crawls we wish it would increase. Enjoyed "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful, timeless love. Written very well indeed If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all!! This is actually a repost (sorry I didn't put that in the title). I've been blocked so badly for so long that everything I write now seems terrible! Sigh. |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
I felt this was a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing it. Since I am new to Passions, I had not seen it before, and I am grateful you posted (or reposted) it. Wanda |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey, you'll get there. . . it's just nice to see you back. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
May you spend billions of moments in love's embrace...James |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
*sigh* very lovely, sharon............ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Time is of the essence...(a contractual term ) Time passes...(anyone could have said it first) I don't believe in time...(Hootie) Time, why you punish me?...(Hootie) 'I never enough time to share my love with all the people who need some lovin...' spoken by a dear friend of mine years ago who had smiles, hugs and love in abundance, and gave freely. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Time is against me, I think, but this is utterly beautiful and filled with love. Sandra |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Love it!! So well written, I could feel how great the love. Red |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww...this is so sweet and romantic, sweet friend! (smiles) Every beat of the heart to a lovers and every skipped heartbeat in harmony is the time lovers share! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This love took not a moment to find a home within my heart I do not know when it will end nor am I sure when it did start The clock held within my heart doesn’t count time in normal space it’s measured in the times I’m held within your loving embrace ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This poem is so special. One of the best I've read. Deb |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Sharon Maree. |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Simply wonderful! I know exactly how you feel... both the feelings expressed in the poem, and the fact that you have had writer's block. I Love this piece!Jan Poetry is an expression of feelings. I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like love to me! Beautifully expressed, Sharon! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
for in that star I find the love that I wish you had for me There are times when I think our thoughts are the same and you just have the better pen. *G* This is beautiful, PDV... felt through and through. |
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