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Lucie
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0 posted 2001-10-26 03:15 PM


I'm gonna tell a story from a long, long time ago
about a group of poets with funny names like Toe.
I really never realized, until recently I'd say
how much I missed the banter and the play.

We told stories of each poet, no one was exempt
we'd laugh as each outdid the last poetic tag attempt.
Searching through the archives I found forgotten posts.
They lurk there in the hallway like spooky hallowed ghosts.

Some of you have never seen it all this game I talk about
if you have a chance please take the time to check it out.
These hallways fill with laughter and the poking never ends
just a bit of banter between great poetic friends.

It seems some of the poets from long forgotten past
have gone on to better things, good things seldom last.
But if by chance a few of you are still around the way
I wondered if you'd join in some old fashion Toetag play.

So I'm calling all the poets like Longjohn and Lorelei,
Elizabeth and Suthern, I've seen you passing by.
I don't know if any others might be hanging out in here
there's one thing that I know for sure.. I saw that Balladeer.

So if your up please let me know I need poetic proddin'
For soon I fear that all my poetic bones will be a rottin.
I've been gone for far to long its time I jumped back in
So here we go Come One Come All let this war begin again.

© Copyright 2001 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-10-26 03:38 PM


I wasn't around for all of it, but I have had the good luck to see enough of it to go digging through the archives...I recommend it highly! And I can't agree more, Lucie! Let's get ready to rummmmmmmmmmmbbbbbbbblllleeee!!!!  
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-10-26 03:41 PM


Gee, ain't one war enough?  No?  Okay, I give you exactly 10 minutes to post something with the word amethyst in it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
3 posted 2001-10-26 07:20 PM


When I was here long ago I was able to see some of the wonderful bantering that went on and I can say for sure it always brought a smile to my face and laughter to my heart. I add my vote to this poem.   is play time about to begin?

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2001-10-26 07:26 PM


LOL, as I wasn't here for the bantering and battering parties, but am ready to jump into one...and betcha Larry C will be right behind me...or in front maybe.  Time for FUN!!!!
Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
5 posted 2001-10-26 11:08 PM


Oh we are gonna have such fun
I think the games have just begun
I came on PIP and heard those legends
Of Longs and Toes and Deers by heaven
and if the games are staring now
I'm at the post...I'll write, and how!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2001-10-26 11:22 PM


Ah...those were the days!!! How quickly they passed. It seems the 'old timers' don't hang out as much as before. I loved this Lucie!! And it's NICE to read you!!!    
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2001-10-26 11:31 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo clever, sweet Lucie! (sigh) I've been here since December of last year and I too have noticed such of this happening every now and then, which always reminds me of sitcoms and is amusing to watch! (sigh) I pray they all may be reunited and such this special family can continue on! (smiles) Wonderful, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C
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8 posted 2001-10-27 03:23 AM


Lucie,
I need to tell Interloper he's playing with fire. I loved this poem as it embodies what I love most about this place! And Midnitesun don't stop or you'll get rear ended!     Wow Lucie, welcome back your my kinda girl. But check the horizon!  

Tag!  You're it!!!  

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 10-27-2001).]

suthern
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9 posted 2001-10-29 09:38 AM


It's sure good to see you back, Lucie... and you're not the only one missing the good ole days... Life is pretty dern difficult for a shadow with no one to follow! LOL

If you can rally the troups, I'll be here with 'belles' on. *G* Great poem... in an effort I applaud. *S*

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