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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-10-29 08:48 AM


Don't know if Tinkerbell got this so Im posting it here.

Pandora’s Phantom

You are to me Pandora’s box.
And the gateway to my Fort Knox
You pamper and pander me
Into a world of ecstasy

You ghost me into fields of green
You femme fatale my every dream
You fly balloons of butterflies
That color up my viewing skies.

You offer wine and ring my chime
Dance upon the grapes of time
Tell me secrets morning glories
And phantoms fantasies stories.

Can’t you tell you weave a spell?
You throw coins in my wishing well.
You delight me with every turn
I hesitate to say you learn.

You are my loving Tinkerbell
An old mans secret wishing well.

© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-10-29 08:54 AM



I heard the clapping...

I believe...

and Tinkerbell will shine...

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-29 09:24 AM


*giggling* no old man penned this beauty but it was our own Seymour. This poem had a smile on my face from beginning to end. I am sure she will absolutely love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

pandora
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3 posted 2001-10-29 09:46 AM


purrrrrfectly delightful!!

i wish someone would write me something so beautiful!  

you have a lucky muse!  

beware pandora's box...


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-10-29 09:51 AM


How could I not admire and adore you
Never doubt all I learn from you too
You share with us your wisdom's gold
Poetic confess of secrets once untold

With gifted pen you explain the sky
Verses to answer our questions of why
Sharing with us life's lessons hard learned
Knowing the gift of giving is one that is returned

Painting our canvas with beauty hued in words of wise
Granting us vision thru thy all knowing eyes of realize
I am so much better for the touch of your gentle hand
So grateful for the walks on your beaches of understand

You are the gold coins that I wish upon
You are my poetic gospel according to John
You see in me ... the me I wish to be
You are the raspberry nectar in my tea

You took a moth and made her a butterfly Tinkerbell
And for these wings ... in my heart you shall 'ever dwell.

~*~

Thank you my dear sweet Sy...
you honor me and touch me so when you wrap me in your rhymes...
Thank you always seems to be too little to say for the gifts of verse and most of all for the gifts of friendship, and all that you share.
Love you Stinky...and Randy too *L*
    
"Tinkerbell"

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-10-29 10:44 AM


Sunshine,
Tinkerbell lights my muse but you are my sunshine. *L*

Startime,
Yo can read her answer. I think everyone loves her. *L*

Pandora,
I hope you didn't mind borrowing your box. LOL

JM,
Wasn't sure you got my last Email, so I posted it. Thank you for the beautiful poem
It's always a joy to read your replies.
Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.

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